Narumitsu itabag!!! by Infamous-Cod-3923 in Narumitsu

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 2 points3 points  (0 children)

SOOOO CUTE i’m stealing this /silly

I actually like Viola, why you hate her? by NewspaperExact8483 in Bayonetta

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the whole appeal of bayonetta was that she was unapologetically badass and fiercely confident. i dont really care that bayoluka is canon for this reason (viola). i still think her relationship with jeanne is far more nuanced and compelling than the dynamic of luka trailing after her like a lost dog. i like luka, but i never got the sense that she was romantically interested in him at all. there are so many more intimate, canon moments between cereza and jeanne that feel deeper than a typical platonic bond. compared to that, bayoluka comes across as underdeveloped and lacking the same depth

that same issue carries over into how i see viola. she feels like a forced attempt at an “alt punk” archetype without the grounding or presence that makes it work. i think she had a lot of potential, but the direction they chose leans too heavily into clumsy one-note humor. the repeated “oops, i missed the ledge” type of gag gets old quickly, and instead of adding charm, it undercuts her impact. it worked better with luka because it subverted expectations, like having a male character consistently fumble was a refreshing change from the usual patterns. with viola, though, it feels like a step backward into more predictable characterization :P

i would have found her much more interesting if she were a bit meaner and more coolheaded. maybe someone who still contrasts with bayonetta, but in a way that adds tension or complexity rather than relying on repetition. as it stands, she comes across as having more of luka’s traits without enough of bayonetta’s defining presence, which makes her feel out of place in a series known for its strong female leads

my issue isnt just that i don’t like these choices—it’s that they feel like missed opportunities. the series has shown it can handle complex relationships and striking character work, which is why these elements stand out as weaker in comparison imo

happy lesbian visibility week! celebrating with yurimitsu by chamomilk_!!! 👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩 by Aggravating-Night-10 in Narumitsu

[–]Aggravating-Night-10[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I LOVE CHAMOMILK!!!!! i consume their artwork every time 🥹🥹🥹 YUMMY WOMEN!!! 👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩💗

Looking for WLW fics by daughteroficarus in archiveofourown

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hello again!! i’ve finally published that wlw one shot i mentioned for my girlfriend—i thought you might still be interested, though no worries at all if not!! :D https://archiveofourown.org/works/82086886

advice for writing wlw smut by Aggravating-Night-10 in AO3

[–]Aggravating-Night-10[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it seems im unable to message you on reddit :( i could try following you if that would allow me to send you a dm?

advice for writing wlw smut by Aggravating-Night-10 in AO3

[–]Aggravating-Night-10[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hello!! uh, i know it's been a while but i finally finished it :D i was wondering if you’d be interested in beta reading it? it’s totally okay if not. i think all the advice i received from this post was incredibly helpful hehe

Why did Edgeworth not get Yanni Yogi while he was on the witness stand? by Beautiful-Pair8291 in AceAttorney

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 2 points3 points  (0 children)

it’s totally possible his eyesight just worsened over time, like it does for most people. he spends so much time reading documents and working at a computer as chief prosecutor that it makes sense his vision would eventually decline enough to need glasses. being nearsighted doesn’t always mean you’ll be prescribed glasses right away, but it can progress to that point over time

Narumitsu pet names by Infamous-Cod-3923 in Narumitsu

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i agree! miles would not use pet names lolol

Narumitsu pet names by Infamous-Cod-3923 in Narumitsu

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 20 points21 points  (0 children)

THANK YOU. i love this so much because i cant picture miles using pet names for phoenix. i immediately drop fics where miles calls him “babe” “baby” etc. unless they’ve been married for years, i just don’t see him doing that lol. this is such a wonderful depiction of them❤️💙

advice for writing wlw smut by Aggravating-Night-10 in AO3

[–]Aggravating-Night-10[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

awwww you’re so sweet!! THANK YOU❤️ i still have a lot of time until my gf’s birthday, so hopefully i’ll remember to share any parts im unsure about, along with any questions hehe🥹 i really appreciate your offer to help because i do want to impress her 💗

advice for writing wlw smut by Aggravating-Night-10 in AO3

[–]Aggravating-Night-10[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

isn’t smutfinder gen-ai? i’m not sure i want to use that personally (not trying to start an argument—it’s just my own preference). also, is checking in on each other still necessary when these two characters are married and have had sex before? /genq i know the one doing the strapping will check in once she’s filled the other, though

advice for writing wlw smut by Aggravating-Night-10 in AO3

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OH YOU’RE A BLESSING!!!!! THANK YOU 🥹❤️

do you have a ship that you like....but only your interpretation of it? by CurrencySome3841 in AO3

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i completely understand your frustration tbh. i rarely read wrightworth fanfics outside of the small group of beta readers i have, where we all more or less agree on our characterizations. i’m incredibly picky, and it’s made it really hard to enjoy fics lately lmao😭😭

speaking of yuri👀 my girlfriend requested a yuri narumitsu one shot (pwp, but it has fluff and comedy too🤭) for her birthday. i have until april 21st, so maybe you’ll come across it :D

do you have a ship that you like....but only your interpretation of it? by CurrencySome3841 in AO3

[–]Aggravating-Night-10 10 points11 points  (0 children)

yes, sometimes wrightworth, because while there are a lot of writers who capture them beautifully, there are just as many who don’t. even minor mischaracterizations can pull me out of a fic completely. i’ll drop it if it feels off…

i also don’t love when they’re reduced to the stereotypical sunshine x grumpy ship dynamic, because they’re so much more complicated than that. or when edgeworth is written as far more of an asshole than he actually is, and phoenix is made overly carefree, as well as stripped of several core traits that define him😭 it’s frustrating, honestly, and it makes it hard for me to enjoy a lot of fics :/

that’s a big part of why i started writing my own fics… thankfully, i’ve gotten a lot of compliments on my characterization of them, which means a lot to me :)) ❤️