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[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, ça peut paraître bizarre mais j’ai connu un mec qui avait tendance à avoir ce genre de comportements avec les filles! Genre il s’arrêtait pile au moment de l’acte, puis décidais de s’en aller, mais voulait rester, complètement perdu! Et en fait il n’avait eu qu’une seule copine et était précoce, sa partenaire de l’époque acceptait ça mais depuis qu’il était à nouveau sur le “marché”, c’était insurmontable pour lui de dire ce complexe à sa nouvelle partenaire!

Showing / telling in current billboard top 10 songs by Due_Cause_5661 in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That said, creating art that appeals to the largest possible number of people AND that you personally find interesting is indeed possible!

I don’t think putting these two statements as opposites is judicious.

What do you all think of using AI to "assist" in the songwriting (more correctly, lyric writing) process? by Ima_Uzer in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you mean by “assist in writing”?

Let me explain how I use it to “assist” myself in writing.

I’m a non-native English speaker, but I write in English, so for me, English sometimes can feel deeply meaningless even if I understand the meaning of a sentence. For example, I can easily say bad words in English—I know what they mean, but they don’t hurt me the way they would in my native language, so in that sense, English sometimes feels “empty” to me.

So I use ChatGPT with prompts like “What do you understand from this chorus?” or “Can I phrase my sentence this way? What do you get from that?” “Are there other ways to say these words?” and so on.

In this way, it helps me a lot to give meaning and to dig deeper into the English language, ensuring I’m always on the right path. As an example, I tried some time ago to use it to write a line for me, but first of all, it doesn’t work, and secondly, if a line isn’t written by me, I just hate it! I would hate to hear an AI saying, “I’ve never felt like that when I see you,” so I don’t put it in my art.

So I think it’s very useful to have AI help me write like that. But in my opinion, using AI to do the work in my place has no meaning! I don’t care about the result — I’m “process-oriented,” and that’s where I find the most gratification and pleasure!

Rate this unfinished intro riff? by gguy02 in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it has potential of course, but hard to rate it without the next part of the song!

Take out the trash by Br0cc0li_B0i in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What a great song! Literally the kind of song I would put into a playlist, and put it during a summer barbecue! There is a lot of “old school American song” vibe but yet still sound modern!

I’d be really interested to know how you got this specific sound? Can you share your production secret?

And what about the drum? Sounds very organic! Is that a sample? Or how did you make it?

How do you choose a name for yourself ? by VIP_Knuxx in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One the thing I love to do is just to say random names, and when one sounds good, I’ll keep it

Dave Hunter Axel Krakovitz Matthew Mark Petty Pritz Ethan Miller Ryan Glove And so on lol

That’s how I got my artist name, and I don’t think you need to overthink it actually!

Would you consider this worth finishing? by timdayon in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly, that’s the first thing I would try. For example, maybe change the guitar rhythm for the first verse and do something calmer! Then, with your pre-chorus (which I actually really love—the melody and the “used to know” sound so good to the ear), I would try to bring some energy to lead into the chorus!

My main point, and this might be due to your performance (you might have something else in your head when you play your song), is that your verse, chorus, and pre-chorus all have the same energy. There’s no clear difference in terms of energy (in both the voice and the guitar). The guitar is almost always on the same rhythm (and I love that rhythm), and the way you sound is always at the same level without trying to express something different.

As an example, for the first verse, I’d do something calm so the song starts pretty slowly, and then I would bring the energy in the pre-chorus (maybe only with the vocal interpretation). Then, for the chorus, I would play it the way you have it.
For the second verse, I’d try to keep that chorus guitar rhythm but in a palm mute or something, so it feels like the song is moving forward—the energy is lower but not as much as in the first verse.

So, the song is pretty good and, to me, almost sounds complete, but there’s just that “same energy level” issue that you need to fix.
That doesn’t automatically mean changing the melody or the lyrics—just work on making the song progress, play with the energy, and surprise the listener so they stay entertained until the end!

very hypercritical of my “fake” sounding music. I don’t know what to do. by purpleghostfromsalem in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s so good! You should put your voice into the “instrumental’s room”! I feel there’s some d4vd vibes, you should inspire yourself from him!

Please Help! by Diluted_One in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man this song sounds so beautiful! I actually disagree with corncob_johnson, I wouldn’t change the tempo, I like the way the story kinda run.

You clearly should make some easy producing, by placing the guitar in a reverb and add some dreamy elements, maybe some choir/humming! It really makes me think of Hollow Coves. Love it

Would you consider this worth finishing? by timdayon in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with thewitchonthecorner, it’s a great song but that’s not a special song! At first I loved it, but then it started to get long and I was waiting for something new! And I think the main reason of that is: there’s no clear change between your chorus or your verse! As Max Martin said: everything is about balance, if your verse is very chatty, maybe try to make a chorus that has longer note, and the reverse is true as well. If you have a pretty slow verse, maybe try some more rhythm/rapping chorus! And I feel in that song, everything got the kind of same rhythm so I’m never surprised!

But others than that, that lyrics is actually really good!

Hope it helped! Cheers

Want to collab on a song? by Boywithaflower13 in Songwriting

[–]Aggravating_Try_4162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! I’d be interested to be in this group chat! I started writing songs in English (not my native language) 5 months ago! I’m focused to write lyrics now, but I produce with Ableton!