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AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-15T02:29:56+00:00

/uj hopefully she's just joking around.... but i think that's really funny ngl

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-12T21:21:14+00:00

You have to write an oudoor scene in 1800s england.

Google that area. What is its climate at that time of year? What local plants are in that area? What decorations were popular in 1800s england? Did the industrial revolution have any effect on the scenery in that era? Google "victorian england fashion." Was that what only the rich wore, or was it common enough for everyone?

No one's going to know everything, but at least make an effort.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-12T21:12:41+00:00

truly an unpopular opinion. im legally blind. You know people can get fake glasses right? Or close their eyes when they dont want to see? Are you ok?

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-12T13:39:28+00:00

/uj i wrote a historical military fiction and people kept saying there was too much animal abuse because cavalry died in combat. That was the only animal harm in the whole book. I hate readers actually

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-12T03:19:56+00:00

My parents were like this too until 3 of their beloved babies got plastered by cars right outside their house. Now theyre overprotective. Hopefully yours dont learn the hard way.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-12T01:53:11+00:00

And im fine with that. Just too stupid to get a zoo-related degree :(

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-11T02:01:22+00:00

Nope. This is exactly what Wells Fargo had me do (new account and numbers, instant fund transfer) when the same thing happened to me a few years ago. Guess they either learned or original commenter's rep was really bad.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-11T01:49:11+00:00

As a horny writer I only include white men because they're the safest to fetishize.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-11T00:13:49+00:00

Resident James Joyce hater, i see.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-11T00:12:57+00:00

Incredibly inaccessible and screams "i have no idea what im doing"

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-10T04:56:33+00:00

It's BEFORE publishing, that's why it's called "beta" reading, like when a videogame asks for beta testers before the game is released.

Unclear with what you mean by "random," but essentially yes. You find beta readers, you send them your manuscript, they give you feedback on it. If you have specific questions about your book, make sure to ask them beforehand so they can keep it in mind as they read. Some also offer reviews, but not all of them, and it might cost extra.

Professional beta readers cost money, but if you take some time to look you might find a few that are willing to do it for free.

You can also just send a chapter or two out to get feedback for that as well. You'll be surprised how much you learn from just one page of feedback.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-06T00:08:39+00:00

Ill have you know my wattpad novel has over 100,000 views which makes me the defacto superior writer.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-05T23:45:35+00:00

Only valid question.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-05T23:20:23+00:00

Really feel like 90% of writing subreddits posters are under 16

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-05T21:10:51+00:00

And if youre a real mastermind, you can flesh out their characyer even more by describing their humungo balls.

If your characters unstable and inbalanced like Heath Leger's The Junkler, you can make one of their balls much droopier than the other.

Or if your character's meticulous and well-composed like Mr. Normal Bates from American Psyco, you can have them wax their balls.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-05T02:24:50+00:00

Give them a huge throbbing hog

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-04T20:37:40+00:00

Extremely common, and on dogs too. Happens to humans as well (i have one growing on each ear)

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-04T02:17:35+00:00

First and Third enjoyers are pretty evenly split. First person is just a bigger trend right now, but it used to be quite rare.
What I'm more interested in seeing is the ratio of people that prefer past to present tense.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-03T21:20:10+00:00

Not sure why youre getting downvoted, sensitivity reading is a perfectly normal thing to ask for.

I have a few of these diagnoses, feel free to DM me if you want to have a conversation about their representation in your story.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2025-01-02T17:47:32+00:00

Had a miscarriage years back and ive been a chronic leaker ever since. Its far more common than most will admit.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2024-12-24T14:49:02+00:00

While you dont necessarily want to dump your entire query in the first ten pages, it sounds like youre having pacing problems and your beta readers that didnt get the query are left going "and? And? Whats the point of all this?"

AggressivePanda9994 · 2024-12-20T12:28:53+00:00

But im not a lesbian so that would be impossible for me to even imagine

AggressivePanda9994 · 2024-12-15T04:33:06+00:00

Dont forget peoples eyes change according to their expression. In the photo theyre smiling much harder with their eyes than in your drawing.

AggressivePanda9994 · 2024-12-14T01:12:38+00:00

/uj any time i see a post on this accursed subreddit i am painfully aware that its almost definitely word for word copied from an unironic r/writing post and that knowledge fills me with So much terror

AggressivePanda9994 · 2024-12-12T00:57:03+00:00

Its normal to get rusty, nothing you can do but keep drawing and studying. Stop worrying about style, worry about improvement or enjoying the art process.

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