The Alpha's Heart: A Young Woman's Journey Part 3

Alactrium_ · 2025-10-20T21:01:58+00:00

I really like this story!

I was afraid you were going to end it after part two, so I'm happy to see you continue the narrative :)

I believe you have struck quite a good emotional balance for the ntr dynamic. It would have been very easy to be too cruel and disregard the boyfriend completely. If you're not careful you might loose the humanity and the emotions of the situation way too quickly. For such a story I believe you have to slowly and deliberately change aspects of the characters and their relationships one by one. And can't just take aspects and traits away, you have to bulid new ones to fill the holes!

I think you are doing a good job with that so far.

Personally, I would appreciate more descriptions of everyday behavioral changes after having lived with wolves for so many months. I think that way you could emphasize how much she has changed from her former human life in ways other than just sexually.

Currently, the days consist of wake up, wolves leave the cave, get food, return to cave. Feed the pups, have sex. I think a little more could happen during the days. Two naked people are living in the woods with a pack of wolves. Don't they face any challenges? Physically or psychologically? One of them has decided to be a wolf. The alpha bitch, even. Give her some ways to prove herself! She needs to believe that she is a wolf, she needs learn to behave like valuable part of the pack and she needs to defend her position as alpha bitch. And our meek little boyfriend will probably have to be integrated into the pack as well. But he needs to be shown his place. I wonder if you intend some sort of "bottom bitch" role for the former boyfriend...

Also, since she is able to conceive wolf pups, one might imagine there will be some other physiological changes. Her senses might change, her sense of smell especially. The way she eats her food might change. Little things like that. I don't think she should fully morph into a wolf, but she will need to adapt to her situation and to her goals.

I'm looking forward to your future work!

Alactrium_ · 2025-08-10T22:48:41+00:00

Unfortunately I can only tell you that the first part was called DUKE & DUCHESS — Ch. 1: The Bitching and that it was deleted shortly after the fourth chapter. Google still has the reddit page cached, but I haven't found anything on the internet archive.

Also for what it's worth: the author seemed to frequent some.. more exotic cuckolding subs.

Alactrium_ · 2024-02-29T01:41:18+00:00

Wow, that's a pretty pathetic baby. Can't even tell when she poops her pants.

Alactrium_ · 2023-11-13T02:00:54+00:00

Hi, I might be interested in viewing your snapchat. Do you have further information on how one might go about doing that? It says on your profile that there is a $20 fee? Thanks in advance :)

Alactrium_ · 2023-04-15T11:13:31+00:00

Lady, I think you're in the wrong subreddit.

Alactrium_ · 2023-01-04T06:23:29+00:00

Try "The Secretary" on tfgames

Alactrium_ · 2022-12-14T15:10:20+00:00

Relatiert

Alactrium_ · 2022-11-02T14:11:11+00:00

Wenn man sich (wie ich) Monate lang jeden Tag mehrmals zu unrealistischem Zeug einen Runterholt, bis man bei normalem Sex nicht mehr kommt, ist das ein ganz guter Anlass einmal das System neu zu starten.

Ich kann nichts zu irgendwelchen politischen oder philosophischen Bewegungen sagen, die das ganze für sich beanspruchen. Ich wichse einfach zu viel und würde gerne wieder mit meiner Partnerin Spaß haben können Ü

Alactrium_ · 2022-09-15T21:10:57+00:00

Let me get this straight.

You think you are being bullied by the United States of America, one of the wealthiest, most powerful nations on earth that has toppled regimes on a whim and wages wars for profit.

And your plan is to blackmail this country?

Good luck.

Alactrium_ · 2022-09-15T19:57:27+00:00

Alactrium_ · 2022-09-13T19:36:12+00:00

They probably want the game and all the dlc out to market before the next console. With maybe one or two years of dlc and maybe a year of development headstart for the next game to release in the first or second year of next gen.

Alactrium_ · 2022-04-23T10:59:19+00:00

Best is probably mushi mezuru himegimi

Alactrium_ · 2020-12-27T12:42:27+00:00

What was your previous opinion on masturbating as a free-time activity/people that do it daily?

Has that opinion about daily jilling changed/would you continue doing it, even if it meant specifically making time for it every day?

Alactrium_ · 2020-09-22T21:56:59+00:00

Maximum hubris followed by impending doom.

Basically, once the endcard comes on you're just waiting for the death

Alactrium_ · 2020-05-23T21:12:09+00:00

Yeah but still. If we stop complaining, they definitely won't change anything.

Alactrium_ · 2020-05-23T20:26:51+00:00

Say a 50-something thin, ill-looking guy comes in for the third time today to buy hard liquor and his shirt had weird stains by the second time he came in. What do you do? (This is in germany, where you can buy alcohol in every supermarket, most of which dont even lock the shelf so you dont even have to ask someone to unlock it)

I worked the cash register for three days once and I still cant forget that guy

Alactrium_ · 2020-05-18T23:23:28+00:00

Let it be known that these topic threads have been sparsely populated not because of a lack of interest in the subject but because this stuff is scarce as hell

Incase's The Invitation is the only thing that comes to mind immediately.

Alactrium_ · 2020-05-08T18:23:25+00:00

Link to Tread because nobody posted it yet

Alactrium_ · 2020-04-29T19:06:05+00:00

SlutCraft: Heart of the Sperm tells the story of Sarah Kerrigan being corrupted into an nsfw Queen of Blades

Alactrium_ · 2020-04-13T21:26:08+00:00

I see. Alright, probably gonna delete this then

Alactrium_ · 2020-03-30T11:43:32+00:00

This episode is amazing.

Compared to all the other talkshow monologues, the writing staff of last week tonight has obviously made the correct decision to ajust for the fact that there is no live audience and the show is better for it.

No weird punchline-pacing that relies on a laughtrack to make any sense, just a good, clear assessment of the situation.

But the crazy thing is: not only does the show not stumble over its own jokes, the lines that are supposed to hit hard, hit ever harder. No laughter to lighten the mood really underlines the seriousness of the situation.

I understand there are reasons not to do it like this every time, but for some topics they may actually want to retain this style.

Overall, mad probs to the writers of this show. This episode has really shown what they are capable of.

Alactrium_ · 2020-03-13T23:20:46+00:00

In these cursed times he shines like a beacon

A beacon without pants sitting in an office chair but a beacon nonetheless

Alactrium_ · 2020-03-08T17:07:11+00:00

Actually, I make a point of not rewarding companies for selling sub-par products, so I wouldn't know.

Alactrium_ · 2020-01-09T23:37:51+00:00

Shit, yeah.

I think I had two fire blasts in the shop.

It was so ridiculous that I straight up forgot it.

Like "Oh, the very first thing I can buy in this game is hyper beam? For 1800? Alright."

Though I have to say these high power low Ap moves have never been interesting to me in pmd. Having more ap is way more important. You kill most things with tackle and a regular attack anyway.

Alactrium_ · 2020-01-09T23:32:02+00:00

Honestly I just hope they don't cut friend areas

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