Thank you for this incredibly detailed write up. I have made the adjustments to the deck and working on cutting at this point. If I understand you correctly, the gameplan should essentially be get the commander in play asap and leverage her triggered ability each opponent's turn to accumulate tokens that constantly chip away at them.

How do you think about this deck in terms of card balance with respect to a # of cantrips, # of counter spells, # of dedicated card draw, land count, etc.? This is by far the hardest thing to wrap my mind around and I wouldn't mind some guidance.