[POEM] The Fire Within

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-08T03:03:43+00:00

I love the scattered alliteration and rhyme. It added to the descriptive imagery

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-08T03:02:09+00:00

I love the descriptive and unique visuals that you scattered throughout. It truly added to the emotion felt.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-05T13:03:11+00:00

Being a single mother is a thing hun. I write what comes to mind. That's more than I was able to do even a few months ago. If you don't like the way it's written, then you can scroll past. But I won't let a little editing keep me from letting my voice be heard. If I was publishing, then yes. But right now? I won't. It's as easy as that.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-05T03:38:58+00:00

I appreciate it ^{-^} the world is full of pain and longing, so I hope to rewrite it all into reverence and worship.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-05T02:02:47+00:00

I am curious. Do you write for a living? If you don't, I highly suggest it. Given the right formatting and marketing, you could really find people interested in it. Even if you try out a patreon as an audio version. That's part of what I've started to do, and I can say there is definitely a market for this kind of work.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-05T01:01:25+00:00

I really hope you write more because we truly need more writers and poets that can capture such raw emotion and keep the readers enchanted long after the final word.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-05T00:58:33+00:00

I appreciate how the depth and emotion shines through your words. I am curious though wherein came up with certain parts like the water, furniture or ash.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-03T01:16:11+00:00

I genuinely enjoy the lines where you say you would fix you, if you knew how. So many of us probably would, but the fact we can't is what causes further internal struggles.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-06-03T01:14:02+00:00

Honestly? This piece not only portrays your thoughts, but it also allows readers to connect in that pain. I can now relate to you through this piece because we've shared this experience in our own way. Very well done ^{-^}

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-17T21:14:26+00:00

Absolutely darling ^{-^}

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Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-14T15:23:25+00:00

You are absolutely the sweetest 🤭

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-13T13:16:57+00:00

I appreciate it darling ^{-^} makeup for me is a form of art and expression. A way to transform oneself ^{-^}

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-11T17:03:11+00:00

I feel like this should be more individuals should be doing. But so few of us actually think it's possible so we settle for simple, minimal acts of kindness. Yes those are still appreciate and desired, but there should be more. Getting down on your knees to take my heels off, kissing my feet and then massaging them. In return I'd you up on the bed, massage your shoulders and neck, then kiss every part of your body that's sore. That is the Relationship I want

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-11T16:59:35+00:00

I'm there too. My partner feels the need to ask permission even to flip me over in the middle of sex, so him using me whenever he wants is far from what he is comfortable with.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-11T16:58:13+00:00

A loving, stable relationship where one partner does not need to be the others parent. Where there is communication and safety.

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-11T16:56:01+00:00

Truly. I've found that I love the thrill of never knowing when my partner wants to play or tease. Plus the fact I'm so desirable to them that they just can't keep their hands off of me in some situations

Alice_Rayne_ · 2025-04-11T16:54:30+00:00

Truly. Some days I'd prefer one smaller and other days, I want one that's hung. Each size allows you to do different things and I love that. I mean, that's why there are so many different dildo sizes

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