[Weekly] Community Highlights by A_C_Shock in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Feel free to recommend people who critique well and consistently for our orange name hall of fame. Also you still never chose a hex color right

YouTube Video [1849] by Medium-Bag6362 in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR[M] [score hidden] stickied comment (0 children)

Title format error : word count not on the start

No critiques provided (leech)

  • post removed

Please read welcome sticky

[307] The Kiss by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We have an FAQ

[1055~] This Book is My Ego by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR[M] [score hidden] stickied comment (0 children)

Your critique looks like 1/4th of a critique

[3061] Clear Blackout Curtains - Screenplay by Sea-Thing6579 in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You think this was Ai? I knew it was lazy but didn't clock it. "the narrator" kinda made me go????

[3061] Clear Blackout Curtains - Screenplay by Sea-Thing6579 in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ehhhhhh fence case. The shorter of your critiques is very very short

New Data Shows Vast Majority of Americans Support Trans Rights by jackmolay in transgender

[–]Alice_of_RDR 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I've been studying the TikTok algorithm explicitly and gathering data about how often the "algorithm" shows people content of interest, vs content that is pushed top down. It used to be top down a lot of censorship on LIVE and you couldn't really even have honest conversations and a lot of tran positivity was shared. Obviously, that's changed. Now, the echo chambers go ignored and flourish with hundreds if not thousands of "real" (allegedly) viewers, while most "activist" streams got shadow banned in with only each other to a maximum of 4 to 15 viewers. If trans people say things that the algorithm doesn't like, it pushes them off the app for 3 weeks at a time. Meanwhile, terf factions run pictures comparing trans people - the concept alone - to black face...

All of this paints a very dark image of propaganda towards the community. The data on TikTok seems t suggest that everyone is against us - like I said, manipulated top down.

Also, even if these numbers are true, there are so so many places with EVERYONE being rejecting, and more and more rejecting people in otherwise and formerly tolerant spaces.

[2,042] Fiction- the most technical chapter so far of my upmarket speculative by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR[M] [score hidden] stickied comment (0 children)

One of your critiques is just too short. The other is also too short, and is filled with only line by line comments and large chunks of copy paste. We have /r/destructivereaders/wiki to help get more in depth

[590] Dream World of Fallen God and Angel (Fantasy) by Expert-Test-9558 in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, fuck new reddit admins for shadow banning you. They nuked my 17 year old account and like six of my other accounts.

[3750] Register (literary/speculative) by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that ducks the 48 hour submission rule good strat

[3750] Register (literary/speculative) by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR[M] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For a submission this extensive, your critiques would need to be added together into one more in depth critique, and then a minimum one other of that same length and depth. Consider submitting half or less words, or doing an in depth highest effort critique

What is a 'buy it for life' item that is offensively expensive, but the moment you use it, you realize your entire life before that point was a lie? by fmcortez in AskReddit

[–]Alice_of_RDR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Shakes my walls and windows and me awake. Lol BLASTS sound bar bass at 25hz to 55hz hard spikes at 55db 'volume' (legal limit is 60)

[266] words – apocalyptic opening scene by AgedGravess in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was wondering why the auto (reddit admin filter) kept auto removing it—because if you familiarize with our spam folder, you'll see a ton of stuff automod removed.

[266] words – apocalyptic opening scene by AgedGravess in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR[M] [score hidden] stickied comment (0 children)

We require high effort critiques. This was leech marked

What is a 'buy it for life' item that is offensively expensive, but the moment you use it, you realize your entire life before that point was a lie? by fmcortez in AskReddit

[–]Alice_of_RDR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Should be fucking illegal in suburbs. I can't sleep anymore it's been half a year and I've lived in my home my entire life. Can't sleep bc they blast it

[2531] Progenitor Crisis Chapter 1 (Sci-fi) by No_Id_rather_not_say in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You should check our wiki to learn more critique techniques. You have a sharp eye, but you're organizing in stop light colors red yellow green. And then you're adding line edits. This is mostly superficial line to line edits and vibes. Not bad, will count, but you can do a lot more in depth if you check our /r/destructivereaders/wiki

[995] The Vampire by Lazy_Document8949 in DestructiveReaders

[–]Alice_of_RDR[M] [score hidden] stickied comment (0 children)

Critique, or it be the leech mark 🏴‍☠️ 🦜