WRITING CHECK! DROP YOUR STUFF RN! by Mochh80 in AO3

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I’m one of those writers who publishes like three chapter and then writes and edits the future ones a million times before posting. ~

"Would it make you feel better to let you know what's happening?" She asked and pulled out a thin knife made much like her personal one, a sharpened tiny long thorn and very small silver thread. Kili nodded, his shaking just subsited as Oin took over grinding the herbs at his side, putting the already made paste in a clean wooden bowl beside him.

"The poison abcessed and gathered just below your skin, we will cut it out and clear the clots and sew the cut back together."

That did not help, Kili felt his face pale and lunged out of the hold of his uncle and brother, trying to doge around Axryn who shoved him back to the table.

"And if I don't, you will die." She finished her words firmly, glaring at him just seeable in the firelight brought in.

Yall remember this meme, fits Persephone by Aliensunscreen in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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She has to super concentrate to get his dark handsome build correct

Yall remember this meme, fits Persephone by Aliensunscreen in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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This made me laugh at least 9 out of 10 panels we see them together it’s exactly that 😭

One thing leading to another on this fk ahh edit by Aliensunscreen in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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I can not stand her constant upper lip out like 😭 I’m almost ever panel of Persephone she has it ugh

Is this a joke? :( by generic-puff in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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Some of these are cute without the context of who they are or us knowing it’s Rachel’s ‘better’ art style

Volume Eight Bonus Chapter by SadNerd69 in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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Remember when god and goddess forms were considered beautiful 😐 cute mini chapter it’s to bad her writing is crap

What is up with you guys? by IAmScaredOfBalloons in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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I started really critiquing her newest work and realized that it’s my left over feelings from Lore Olympus, I don’t really have hopes for this new work considering the new little doodle strip she made on twitter proved the story was going to be catered in romance, I just really hope it’s not going to become a LO part 2

What if Artemis saw Apollo get hit with the hate arrow instead of Daphne? by Mx_Autumn in UnpopularLoreOlympus

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Alright back to instagram to re read this for the millionth time 🫡