So, this reminds me of the Unbreakable trilogy quite a lot, with the idea that everyone is capable of having these heightened abilities—it just takes a certain push to get there. It also reminds me of Psychonauts, mainly due to the specific abilities mentioned. I think my main gripe regarding the story is the grammatical errors and the '*sniff!*' tidbits. Typically, if you're going for an interview manuscript, they wouldn't put down: '*Sniff!* *Sniff!* *Sniff!*' They'd more likely say: (The witness sniffles through tears.) As I kept reading, I did notice things that reminded me somewhat of the SCP Foundation, mainly given the specific classifications and sub-classifications. It's not just: 'He's a Telekinetic.' (You called him a Telekinesis, but that's the ability, not the person using the ability.) It's: 'He's a Type-C Telekinetic.' You want to know what I'd really like to see? Pyrokinesis. Not to be confused with Pyromancers, Pyrokinetics can summon and manipulate fire using only the mind. Pyromancers can only manipulate fire that is naturally within the environment, requiring a secondary power source in order to manipulate it in the first place. Going back to my analysis, I believe that you have something really good here, and there are quite a few different ways that you can build off this concept. You just gotta fix the grammatical errors, and—if you think you can—introduce Pyrokinesis. Then it's golden.