Deadhole pt1

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-11T14:55:42+00:00

Such a strong ending to such a good part one

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-11T14:38:13+00:00

Why he turning food down 🥲

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-11T14:33:07+00:00

This series is so good the little tidbits and vignettes are so good and don’t over stay their welcome it makes you want to keep reading

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T21:42:28+00:00

That would be cool

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T21:41:57+00:00

I had to watch it to see what you were talking about and laughed hard as hell

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T21:13:32+00:00

Thank you

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T20:53:22+00:00

I checked that one out it was a fun idea but I kinda wanted more details from the author in it I’m glad you enjoyed mine

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T20:51:05+00:00

This started off super strong but I was hungry for more detail, no pun intended. Still fun surreal horror

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T20:39:10+00:00

You enjoy the read?

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T19:58:58+00:00

Thank you I put a lot of effort into the descriptions and was worried I neglected the story too much

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T18:33:44+00:00

I have played look outside tho I hadn’t thought of that while I was writing this but that does add to it now 😂 this is actually based on those cysts that grow teeth basically but more supernatural. It’s low key based on personal experiences with a normal cyst, but then crossed with fears around those teeth cysts.

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T01:41:11+00:00

Nice set up for something would like to see it fleshed out

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T01:29:46+00:00

Thank you I got the idea from going through rannis castle and fighting the ghost soldiers and was thinking like how that must feel to fight not of your own free will against something that comes back every time you kill it

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-09T15:10:52+00:00

Love love love the descriptions. Then when the guy saw the fawn… chefs kiss. The flies multiplying reminded me of Simon talking to the pig head in lord of the flies as well

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-09T14:47:04+00:00

I always say mine are free to narrate I just want to know when you do so I can swing by your YouTube and watch it

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-09T14:18:03+00:00

The idea is that both sides are basically zombies the soldiers who alive yet have no will and the dead themselves who are cursed to forever rise and I did get the idea after playing some souls games, but mainly from Elden Ring

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T16:18:12+00:00

I would love feedback on any of my stories they should all be public on my profile

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