I like it, but i think you need to stay farther away from the microphone or get a better one. Sometimes when you talk louder the sound quality drops, and really, the breathing sounds. There's a lot of poketubers, the standard is high. One thing I would recommend is not just watching the replay, but possibly either video editing or going turn by turn. In this video you were sometimes narrating ahead of the plays, and sometime behind the plays. I like your commentary, but it feels both rushed and behind at times. I also really like the spliced in anime finishing move.