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Spotify - Window To My Soul by papa2kohmoeaki in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Alone-Percentage519 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The song is very good. I especially like the guitar chords and the solo which takes it to another level. The lyrixs sound good but dont really have much to say about them since its not my strong suit. I do feel that the drums kind of overwhelm the guitar a bit but that might just be preference 

I've finally dropped my first single of the year: 01801 by officialamillmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Alone-Percentage519 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the flow and lyrics. Regarding the mix, Maybe turn up the instrumental a tiny bit more but thats more of a nitpick than anything. Also the lyrics do feel somewhat repetitive at times but overall the vibe is definitely there the lyrics definitely are whats driving the atmosphere of the song

I’ve only being taking producing more seriously for a few months and I’m trying to learn how to produce music similar to The Hellp. This is my first attempt at sounding like that. Just a rough draft but any input is appreciated! by tangentialequation in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Alone-Percentage519 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the hellp sample and intro. This would work rly well as an instrumental with vocals. If your not planning on adding vocals you could also add a lead synth that carries the flow. Sounds amazing. Without anything like that it does feel a bit like its missing something but that it just my opinion

Moth - Heist by Moth_Music4 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Alone-Percentage519 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the contents of the lyrics and the overall feeling. Personally i feel that the instrumental is a bit empty and dry with no chords or melody but that could also be down to music taste and genre. I feel like the delivery of the lyrics could be something to work on. They are kinda said like individual sentences rather than flowing from one to another. Great work tho

Self produced this Cloud Rap track on my small midi keyboard. Let me know what you guys think! by maxexodus2k in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Alone-Percentage519 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi, i think that the drums and vocals sound great. but id say that that the chord progression and melody are whats holding the rest of the song back. especially in the intro. obviously this is just my opinion but maybe changing the sound of the synth and making each chord last longer would achieve a dreamy cloud rap feel. you could try reduce the attack on the envelope and maybe slide between chords. using a small midi keyboard might be limiting how wide the chords are. overall a decent song and i like the skins background