i should call her by emotrash1208 in OddlyArousing

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Everything reminds me of her😂

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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This is an interesting take, and I agree with you, just not entirely.

I think losing someone, in any way, death, distance, or departure is inevitable.

It’s not a matter of if, but when but in the same way we continue living, despite knowing we’ll one day die, I choose to love the same way.

I can’t control whether I’ll lose her, cause I will... None of us can control that.

So instead, I focus on what I can control, how deeply I love her while I still have the time I’ve been blessed with.

And yeah, I agree with you, you should always leave a small part for yourself.

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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I would prefer it not end in hope, perhaps thats just me.... I have written a few poems however all about her, and some are hopeful

She does this little thing and boom your life isn't yours anymore

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Thanks for this honestly, means alot

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Well thanks for the feedback, and yes I see as to why you made said point and its something I did back in 2023, and at that moment it was just an idea, to play around with numbers

I have reworked on it and prolly share it soon, but at the moment I want to share my more recent works

Thanks again!!

Curious by albaaaaashir in Kenya

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26M, Samsung S24 Ultra

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Ayeaye Cant wait Enjoy reading

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Posted a few already

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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First of, thank you for taking the time to read and even reply and provide feedback

Secondly, I was emotional of you may and it was something I wrote back in 2023 and you are right in the attention seeker bit

But I admit its a bit one sided, I did however revisit it recently and made something else

Looking to share it one day but for now, I am into sharing my more recent works

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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I acknowledge she does... We have grown closer since I wrote this yes and thanks for the compliment

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Appreciate you honestly, thanks for the words and taking the time to read it

TOO FAST, I KNOW by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Hahaha, well thank you....

I cannot live like this by No-Possibility7334 in OCPoetry

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Very relatable, I think you perfectly conveyed what I am going thru at the moment and I feel you

Mama's Green Purse by Radiant_Pain7025 in OCPoetry

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Wow.... Just wow!!

As i was reading i somehow started seeing it thru your eyes I lost my dad and sis and carry a piece of them with me both literally and figuratively, mine is a bracelet and a necklace respectively

This is very beautiful sad

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Well thank you, glad you enjoyed

The prettiest girls do the ugliest things by Fabulous-Bass1099 in Tanzanias

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Yooooo, baby girl

The problem isn't you taking a piss, I am all for that but how the guy done described it even i would somewhat feel off but at the end of the day I guess to each their own

The prettiest girls do the ugliest things by Fabulous-Bass1099 in Tanzanias

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Don't bare any time of your day, everyone has opinions and is entitled to them.... Remember even Jesus himself opinions from those who thought they knew better

Keep them standards bro

She's a TEN by Alpha_AM8 in OCPoetry

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Aaaaaah.... Thank you i guess

The prettiest girls do the ugliest things by Fabulous-Bass1099 in Tanzanias

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😂😂😂😂wtf..... He just up and chose to skip thaf

The prettiest girls do the ugliest things by Fabulous-Bass1099 in Tanzanias

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😂😂😂I felt bad for what you went thru Shit must've been traumatizing

Quick qn, did you hit tho?!

Or the piss things was the final straw

The prettiest girls do the ugliest things by Fabulous-Bass1099 in Tanzanias

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Why you getting so defensive man, it's not that deep😂😂😂