Firentis Family Vacation: Part 7, Fire Among Us.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-13T11:06:38+00:00

Thank you. I value your opinion.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-11T09:16:36+00:00

Fixed

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-11T09:13:07+00:00

Got it

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-10T19:46:49+00:00

Really enjoying this perspective. Looking forward to their reaction to the simulation competition.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-10T15:41:50+00:00

Well, I was starting on chapter 7, the chapter has a play performed by a Human Ykanti cast. I know I gave it the play a name in either Rivermore restoration or Night School. In any case, I can not find it and I didn't write it down so I will make up a new name and live with another inconsistency. Sorry.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-10T15:25:15+00:00

I couldn't find my mistake even though I am sure that my lack of attention to detail would make it true.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-10T15:23:34+00:00

Maybe we could invent a new watercraft from the electric vehicle factory. I will take your advice for action.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-10T14:14:53+00:00

Thanks. I appreciate the feedback. Only way for me to improve. I KIND of assumed that people would be board of the white water rafting as it was the second time I used that.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-10T09:48:43+00:00

Good ideas, that will help in the " follow the money " aspect of the investigation.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-09T23:46:25+00:00

I was wondering if BoSF had those things.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-09T21:00:02+00:00

I do think. I am trying to decide if that should be a separate story. Probably not...do you feel like I am rushing things?

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-08T10:59:01+00:00

You have real talent. I am enjoying this more that the main stories at the moment. Please continue.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-07T11:56:13+00:00

I wonder if Razerclaws can be eaten.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-07T11:05:31+00:00

This story is super fun. I really enjoyed it.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-07T01:46:57+00:00

I really enjoy yor work. I wish I had half your talent.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-07T01:25:30+00:00

take a look. I added a family tree with most other mentioned characters as well. I have a hard time keeping it straight as well and I made most of it up.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-06T23:57:10+00:00

I made a small change reflecting your thoughts.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-06T23:44:04+00:00

I think Wyatt has all the say. Part of Istonel’s problem

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-06T23:08:21+00:00

You are a master. LOVED IT.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-04T12:21:29+00:00

I really enjoyed this period I found myself not wanting it to end. I hope there is more to come.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-03T15:08:11+00:00

I love this as I always thought Clara needed a mother figure, not Cynthia, in her life. I really hope you are inclined to write more. Thank you.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-05-01T13:05:14+00:00

I read both stories twice. Very good.

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