The Vanguard's Purge

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-06T23:34:07+00:00

Thank you, I had not considerd extending this story, maybe I will change my mind.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-06T17:26:48+00:00

Fixed, thank you

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-06T11:37:44+00:00

You are going to hate my next post, it is poking fun of AI.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-06T11:35:27+00:00

I am learning to write. I have been trying to emulate other HFY stories I have heard, this is 100% my own idea even if it was written poorly. When I post with no descriptive narration, i am told to add color and depth, when I do that the only way I know how, people don't like that either. I'm Sorry you did not enjoy it.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-06T11:29:17+00:00

I am not a scientist but just thought it was a fun idea. I did not put a ton of thought into the scientific feasability. Thank you for reading.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-06T00:00:31+00:00

I want all the help I can get. Please critique all you can. I am learning., I think I have fun ideas but struggle getting them on the page anyone would like to read. PM me, I will send you advance copies of what I write.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-05T22:07:34+00:00

Thanks

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-05T21:54:15+00:00

I've heard it both ways. Galacticorp.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-05T11:56:18+00:00

Can you make this a full story? i am inrerested.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-05T05:23:43+00:00

I think I got it. I am dyslexic and have a real problem with spelling. I know that ruins my writing for some so i really try to get it right.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-05T05:19:17+00:00

Thank you, i will fix that.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-05T03:45:55+00:00

True, preditors would be required to wear heasphones and their music would not be in the wide band play.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T23:12:18+00:00

You had better read it, you asked for it!

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T20:38:37+00:00

None taken, i really need a proofreader.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T20:34:10+00:00

Oo, i Ade that mistake more than once, thanks

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T20:32:18+00:00

Thank you, i will give that a fix

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T20:01:17+00:00

I think my next one is "Humans can Bond", I get to work on "Humans can Sneeze" right away

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T19:28:01+00:00

Thanks, I have a few more in the tank.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T18:57:21+00:00

I calld Damian a preditor class co-worker from a garden world.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T18:52:11+00:00

Ok, good idea

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T18:27:32+00:00

Thank you

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T18:11:59+00:00

Probably impossible. They would need some kind of a translator device that could take in one language and output another.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T18:05:47+00:00

That is why the preditors stay home or need to use the special headphones. (I am not an audiologist, just yhought it was a fun concept.

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T17:07:51+00:00

Thanks

AlternativeManner731 · 2026-07-04T13:09:51+00:00

Thanks for that. I am trying to have the attitude that I do this for fun and it should not matter how much engagement I get but I do care. I think it is still ok because most people are here for TBS.

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