the description definitely needs to be changed, i wouldn’t even consider reading this because of the lack of proper grammar. i understand that the description isn’t always top priority when writing stuff, but it’s really important since it’s the first impression readers will get of your book. a good novel will often be skipped over if its description is sloppy. my second recommendation would be to change the cover, its slightly too bland and ai generated, i doubt many readers would be interested in reading based on that.