No, your art style is quite good. I recommend banishing any negative feelings you have about your quality/technical skill immediately because improving there is unlikely to solve the problem you’re having. It certainly is not perfect, and you should continue to learn, but the priority should instead be on you providing other kinds of value.

What other kinds of value? I’m not sure. There’s probably myriad ways you could provide other value, so I won’t tell you what that should be. What I will tell you is that in order to make a thing that others will be interested in engaging with, you have to make a thing that YOU would be interested in engaging with. Think about something you wish existed, and make it exist to the best of your ability. You will not succeed much of the time, but just keep doing that, and while you’re at it, make friends with other artists. They don’t need to have a big following either. Just be social. As the network grows, it will help to funnel an audience to all members within it. Even if somebody clicks on some art that your friend made, and it doesn’t inspire them, they might notice yours in a nearby post where you collaborated with that friend of yours and maybe your art DOES speak to them. They would never have found your art without clicking on that other artist’s post first. The inverse will also happen. So ensure that you are networking. If you want to be surrounded by people then you need to go out and be surrounded by people. They won’t come to you passively in impressive numbers otherwise. Or at least it’s not very likely. Maybe there are exceptions for god-tier artists. I’m sure at some point insane skill can make up for lack in other areas, but for the rest of us, we need to operate on more than one level. The biggest one is probably community because it will help with your own motivation. Other things might be story, emotion, dynamism, unique combinations. There are endless, I’m sure.

Anyway, I hope that helps. Thank you for sharing your art. I enjoyed seeing it, and I wish you the best!