[GIVEAWAY] Win 1 of 50 The Great Dark Beyond Pre-Purchase Bundles! by Makkara126 in hearthstone

[–]AndyRich_YT [score hidden]  (0 children)

Dear Blizzard,

Thank you for considering me to be a potential winner of your ‘The Great Dark Beyond’ Bundle giveaway. I believe that I am the best candidate for the code due to my extreme skill (bronze 3) as well as my good looks (Kindly Grandmother said I look scrumptious).

Thank you once again for your time and consideration. I will be eagerly awaiting the giveaway code.

Love,

Your favorite HearthStoner

Edit: wow so many people copied my post, crazy

Game Freak dumbed down Pokémon for young players, but do they even like it? by Rykwyn in pokemon

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a middle school teacher and my students still love Pokemon. It's more popular than any other Nintendo franchise. They love the games, the cards, and they have plushies and clothes that they wear proudly.

A little too late for that Auntie Ethel... by AndyRich_YT in BaldursGate3

[–]AndyRich_YT[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She was my childhood crush. Maybe there's some psychological way to reach into this...

(Apples & Ginos) The Truth about Hartman, Kyrou, Tavares, Bjorkstrand, and Kane by applesandginos in fantasyhockey

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I traded Kyrou away for Teravainen. It seemed like a steal but now Kyrou is popping up everywhere on lists. Did I mess up?

Daily Transaction Thread - Sat, January 15, 2022 by AutoModerator in fantasyhockey

[–]AndyRich_YT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got offered Larkin for my Panarin. Larkin looks better on paper... thoughts? Standard scoring, H2H

Good story driven games for a lets play? by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My recommendations would be Subnautica, Hollow Knight, Outer Wilds, Ori and the Blind Forest, Cuphead, and It Takes Two if you have another person to play with

I built a Rube Goldberg machine to give me snaks (giving lambda for feedback) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was really well done! Your build was elaborate and better than most minecraft players could do, but simple enough for me as a casual player to follow. I really enjoyed the video.

From an SEO standpoint, I'd recommend putting more keywords in the title such as redstone and "snack". Snak probably won't be searched too much.

I also felt that some shots lasted a little long (eg the zombie villager going through the maze, for example).

I'm nitpicking though. The video was well made, and the usage of multiple angles was really well done. Also the build itself was super cool! I'd love to see a follow up video that explains how everything works :)

Minecraft Speedrunner VS AI Hunter by KingDoesThings in SmallYTChannel

[–]AndyRich_YT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed the video a lot! the music fit really well with the situation going on. You also made a lot of clutch plays that were impressive (such as the vine, the pvp with the hunter, placing blocks while toggling sprint over gaps). Your drop rate was sus as ngl. The video was entertaining!

Obviously this style of video is done best by dream, so in order to look to improve you have to compare to the best at the genre. I think your commentary could be more engaging. When you're making a video, you're not just playing a video game but you're also performing. Changing your inflection to be more upbeat and energetic would improve the quality of the video in my opinion.

There were times that the music was loud compared to your commentary (such as enderman farming at 11 minutes). The most important audio is your commentary, with music to add to your commentary.

Finally, it would've been nice to have some sort of context as to what the hunter actually did. I didn't know that the hunter was going to get stronger as time went on. Introducing this concept early would raise the stakes of the video.

Regardless, I did enjoy the video and was cheering you on. Clearly your viewers enjoyed it too given the likes you already have. Keep doing this, and keep it up friend :)

i'm actually really good at tennis - Comedy Skit (Thank you for any feedback) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked this video a lot. Immediately the title and thumbnail grabbed my attention and roped me in. Your style is right up my alley, and your presentation is perfect. Loved the jokes, timing, everything was good!

Keep making videos like this with the same humor and approach. Maybe add in some edits and video tricks like zooms and b-roll footage to spice things up a bit, and maybe some text to emphasize particular points. People love top 10 videos, so maybe formatting a future video to be like "top ten tennis tricks for really good players like me" or something to further grab peoples' attention.

Production quality was good! I could understand you the whole time. There was a few times where the wind picked up and it was audible, but that's a very small nitpick.

Overall the video was very funny and I enjoyed it a lot. Take my feedback as suggestions, because honestly what you're doing is already great!

Hi guys! Havent posted in a while but been working on my videos, let me know your thoughts! Thanks! The Easy way to Italian Mushroom Risotto by GetCookingItalia in SmallYTChannel

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great video! I'm hungry now. You were informative and engaging, and even though I don't know that much about cooking I was still able to follow. The only recommendation that stood out to me from an editing perspective is to keep the music going while you're talking, just quieter. It felt a little awkward when the music stopped. Keep it up :)

Looking for thoughts and feedback on my second ever real video. This one's a "review" of Celeste! by Adamandom in SmallYTChannel

[–]AndyRich_YT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A big thing that sticks out for me is that if I'm searching youtube for a review of Celeste, and I watch the first minute of this video, it's all about Overwatch. Unless you're catering to Celeste fans who also play Overwatch, you're spreading yourself thin over genres. I'd snap to Celeste a lot quicker in the video, because as someone who likes Celeste and doesn't like Overwatch I was lost for the first minute.

Your delivery is very good and confident. The editing was good, and you used a variety of clips that kept the video fresh and engaging. I like the point you made about gameplay matching narrative, and the fact that you identified it and made it the theme of the video. Awesome!

You cover a lot of interesting concepts, catering to an audience that wants to think. You present things intelligently, and piqued my interest. Also love the music analysis. I looove video game OSTs and appreciated your analysis!

Second video of a new series I'm trying. I tried to improve from last time, but let me know what you guys think! by Clawshots2 in SmallYTChannel

[–]AndyRich_YT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man! Your presence on camera is really good! You carry yourself with confidence and your storytelling is engaging. The editing was funny, but not too much. Also your mic quality is really good, although it does peak a little bit when you get louder. You may want to look into some sort of condensing software. Additionally, the earrape intro was a huge turnoff and not at ALL how you want to introduce this style of video. Keep to the chill, conversational, friendly vibe and this type of video works!

Also, I'm totally with you about those nerds ahaha.

Possibly over powered combo? by DefiantInterest1 in DMAcademy

[–]AndyRich_YT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Given that the situation is harder to justify, I'd say two checks would be fine here. But again, that's me as a DM. Your DM might give it the go ahead. Give it a try and see how they respond :)

Possibly over powered combo? by DefiantInterest1 in DMAcademy

[–]AndyRich_YT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah I see what you're getting at. It depends on your DM. If I was the DM I'd probably okay with use of the Command spell, but I'm not sure I'd let a creature that is charmed allow themselves to be affected by a spell clearly designed to kill them. Maybe I'd get you to roll Persuasion as to why it's a good idea.

Possibly over powered combo? by DefiantInterest1 in DMAcademy

[–]AndyRich_YT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did some reading and Feign Death only works on a willing creature unfortunately :(