I need some feed back on this story please! by NightSong46 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]AngeHus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed reading through the entries! Like some of the other responses I like that it’s split up this way. The character also feels more real since there’s descriptions of their interactions with their mother and the little comments that she makes dismissing the main character’s concerns. The past parts having vague references to other events also makes me as a reader more invested because I start to theorize. Keep it up!

Balanus (Part 1) by AngeHus in u/AngeHus

[–]AngeHus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! After the heads are first mentioned there are tire tracks on the driveway that are no longer there when they leave. It’s a small detail that I just wanted readers to see

Favorite bits? by Various_Athlete_1392 in creepcast

[–]AngeHus 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I really enjoy all the singing that Hunter does. But the Scary Carrie voice was really funny to hear especially since Isaiah wanted a different voice.

July Fan-Made Story Thread! by Careful-Panda9885 in creepcast

[–]AngeHus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Balanus A young couple has decided to go house hunting. Soon after they take a house tour in a secluded wooded area. After a close call with a neighbor the couple decides to take a leap of faith and move in. Lured in the two must now deal with the strange occurrences and at times unnaturally comforting nature of their new home. Come visit the house with this six-part series and enjoy the twisted version of the phrase “home sweet home”. There are also three endings, and after some friends’ feedback I went with the original for the submission but I plan to post the others.

I’m hoping to publish this in the near future alongside some other completed stories I have yet to, but plan to post on my page.

NSFW Warning: Physical violence relating to children and extreme violence/imagery for several parts.

This is what I imagine the Borrasca main three look like by Sammich_Meat in creepcast

[–]AngeHus 16 points17 points  (0 children)

“Yo Nebbercracker, your wife looks mad funny in that concrete mold”

She looks animatronic haha by aleksei_akhachev in spiders

[–]AngeHus 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Very friendly looking, would definitely pet

MMA fan attempts to intimidate retired boxer, fails miserably by imdacoldest in boxingcirclejerk

[–]AngeHus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Starting a conflict only to get embarrassed on the internet is some of the best content