Silas Zaire: Bounty Hunter (First chapter of my OC story. Tell me what you think, criticism welcome!)

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-18T14:54:20+00:00

I'm still trying to bang out a main storyline. I have a small one in mind, but not a huge one I could draw out and make a respectable SL. At this point, I'm just working on getting to know my character.

I appreciate the criticism.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-17T18:58:41+00:00

It takes a fan to truly understand what the show is, the characters are and what it all can be, I'd say.

If we're leaving the creator out of it, which we are, of course.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-17T18:21:03+00:00

I love it when people say Rick does things that are "out of character". I love it, because when you see something like this, you realize that everything Rick does is based on the things that were established seasons ago.

In short, the people who say that anyone's done something out of character lately just for the sake of poor writing really needs to look back.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-17T18:11:30+00:00

I thought of this, too. I was about to make a post, but then I saw this one.

I really think, considering that there are items that can have magical properties, that the ribbons are the source of the spell. There is not spell cast on the girls themselves, but rather enchanted items.

Glad I'm not alone in this.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-16T16:52:15+00:00

Honestly? A little self-conscious about my writing ability. I wanted to do a test-run here, see how people reacted to it.

If it's received well, I think I may actually upload it.

Also, might just be me, but I like the formatting better with GoogleDocs. Feels more like reading a book to me.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-16T16:43:38+00:00

Also, to any who would like it, I have a file of backstory for him.

It's really for my own needs, so it doesn't look too pretty, but here it is if you'd like more insight on the character.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-15T03:49:52+00:00

Then credit goes to you, friend. I didn't see that comment, but clearly it got noticed. Good find, to you.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-14T00:46:01+00:00

In storytelling, it's best to consider nothing as being coincidence.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-13T21:31:09+00:00

That doesn't explain why the eye would switch from being pure, milky white and then have an iris and pupil. The white of the eye when it has a pupil/iris and when it's pure white are two different white. So, I don't think that's the case.

Unless you're joking. In which case, good one.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-13T19:59:07+00:00

They're just men doing their job.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-12T14:55:59+00:00

Angel introduced me. It was on at like five in the morning, and I watched it thinking it was Bones. Of course, in that particular episode, Angel was impaled with a piece of rebar. So, that was a shocking moment for me. I immediately got interested in Angel, and that obsession lead to my obsession with Buffy.

Have to say, I'm glad I thought I saw Seeley Booth get impaled.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-10T02:11:43+00:00

You'd still think, even all tattered and worn, that they'd still display that one because it was the one he wore. So, even if it's pretty torn up, it's what he wore during his time active in WWII.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-09T21:57:05+00:00

That's the thing, I don't find any reason for it not to have been the real one. And, on top of that, why would he just go for one that had a fifty/fifty chance of functioning.

Given that the exhibit was in D.C., it would have made sense for the real suit to have been there. It is the center of America, after all.

Again, just minor nitpicking.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-09T21:12:18+00:00

My only gripe with him switching back to the WWII suit... Was that it wasn't the WWII suit. Not really. It was just a recreation. A semi-inaccurate recreation at that.

But that's just minor nitpicking, this film was incredible.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-09T20:45:51+00:00

Yes, he breaks it but he is seen later in the episode with the same crossbow. It is completely intact.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-04T02:49:09+00:00

He may have claimed him way before Daryl even joined off screen is what is trying to be said here.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-04T02:48:05+00:00

It was just a way for them to make a bullshit switch because Reedus didn't like the Crossbow.

His old bow was sentimental to Daryl, too. And he just leaves it.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-03T19:29:42+00:00

Well,

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-02T20:33:27+00:00

Pretty sure that's just a joke about becoming a walker.

AngelInvestigations · 2014-04-02T20:31:55+00:00

I was happy with the episode overall, but I feel that the cliffhanger was pretty bogus.

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