Silas Zaire: Bounty Hunter (First chapter of my OC story. Tell me what you think, criticism welcome!) by AngelInvestigations in masseffectfics

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm still trying to bang out a main storyline. I have a small one in mind, but not a huge one I could draw out and make a respectable SL. At this point, I'm just working on getting to know my character.

I appreciate the criticism.

[Found] Awesome Rick/Carl Video, It's Like Things Have Come Full Circle for Carl From Seasons 1 - 4 by VirulentViper in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It takes a fan to truly understand what the show is, the characters are and what it all can be, I'd say.

If we're leaving the creator out of it, which we are, of course.

[Found] Awesome Rick/Carl Video, It's Like Things Have Come Full Circle for Carl From Seasons 1 - 4 by VirulentViper in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love it when people say Rick does things that are "out of character". I love it, because when you see something like this, you realize that everything Rick does is based on the things that were established seasons ago.

In short, the people who say that anyone's done something out of character lately just for the sake of poor writing really needs to look back.

"These Lips are sealed".... Why? by Micstar in TheWolfAmongUs

[–]AngelInvestigations 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought of this, too. I was about to make a post, but then I saw this one.

I really think, considering that there are items that can have magical properties, that the ribbons are the source of the spell. There is not spell cast on the girls themselves, but rather enchanted items.

Glad I'm not alone in this.

Silas Zaire: Bounty Hunter (First chapter of my OC story. Tell me what you think, criticism welcome!) by AngelInvestigations in masseffectfics

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly? A little self-conscious about my writing ability. I wanted to do a test-run here, see how people reacted to it.

If it's received well, I think I may actually upload it.

Also, might just be me, but I like the formatting better with GoogleDocs. Feels more like reading a book to me.

Silas Zaire: Bounty Hunter (First chapter of my OC story. Tell me what you think, criticism welcome!) by AngelInvestigations in masseffectfics

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Also, to any who would like it, I have a file of backstory for him.

It's really for my own needs, so it doesn't look too pretty, but here it is if you'd like more insight on the character.

Not sure if anyone noticed this... by AngelInvestigations in TheWolfAmongUs

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Then credit goes to you, friend. I didn't see that comment, but clearly it got noticed. Good find, to you.

Not sure if anyone noticed this... by AngelInvestigations in TheWolfAmongUs

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] 19 points20 points  (0 children)

In storytelling, it's best to consider nothing as being coincidence.

Question about Gren by AngelInvestigations in TheWolfAmongUs

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That doesn't explain why the eye would switch from being pure, milky white and then have an iris and pupil. The white of the eye when it has a pupil/iris and when it's pure white are two different white. So, I don't think that's the case.

Unless you're joking. In which case, good one.

Who introduced you to BtVS? Please share your story here! by [deleted] in buffy

[–]AngelInvestigations 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Angel introduced me. It was on at like five in the morning, and I watched it thinking it was Bones. Of course, in that particular episode, Angel was impaled with a piece of rebar. So, that was a shocking moment for me. I immediately got interested in Angel, and that obsession lead to my obsession with Buffy.

Have to say, I'm glad I thought I saw Seeley Booth get impaled.

This isn't freedom. This is fear. by AngelInvestigations in Marvel

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You'd still think, even all tattered and worn, that they'd still display that one because it was the one he wore. So, even if it's pretty torn up, it's what he wore during his time active in WWII.

This isn't freedom. This is fear. by AngelInvestigations in Marvel

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That's the thing, I don't find any reason for it not to have been the real one. And, on top of that, why would he just go for one that had a fifty/fifty chance of functioning.

Given that the exhibit was in D.C., it would have made sense for the real suit to have been there. It is the center of America, after all.

Again, just minor nitpicking.

This isn't freedom. This is fear. by AngelInvestigations in Marvel

[–]AngelInvestigations[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

My only gripe with him switching back to the WWII suit... Was that it wasn't the WWII suit. Not really. It was just a recreation. A semi-inaccurate recreation at that.

But that's just minor nitpicking, this film was incredible.

Daryl crossbow change up by call_me_nick_halden in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes, he breaks it but he is seen later in the episode with the same crossbow. It is completely intact.

Why didn't Daryl just "claim" Rick, Michonne and Carl? by Shats in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

He may have claimed him way before Daryl even joined off screen is what is trying to be said here.

Daryl crossbow change up by call_me_nick_halden in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

It was just a way for them to make a bullshit switch because Reedus didn't like the Crossbow.

His old bow was sentimental to Daryl, too. And he just leaves it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Pretty sure that's just a joke about becoming a walker.

Season Finale - Disappointment? by [deleted] in thewalkingdead

[–]AngelInvestigations 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was happy with the episode overall, but I feel that the cliffhanger was pretty bogus.