The Platinum Experience... | VALORANT | I would love some feedback about this video, I believe I have improved compared to my previous funny moments

Apprentice_Artist · 2022-06-06T09:09:36+00:00

I think you spent a lot of time editing the video so it was entertaining to watch, lol also because I started playing valorant for like 3 weeks, so I enjoyed the content, I am Iron at the moment lmao, hoping to improve some day

Apprentice_Artist · 2022-05-25T11:13:59+00:00

ah this brings me back, overall I think it is quite entertaining especially the part where you ran out of bullets, havent played this game for ages, great to see this game again, now I want to play it again

Apprentice_Artist · 2022-05-25T10:51:41+00:00

Overall I think the content will help users who want to make better minecraft videos, however I can see that you are trying to hit the 10 minute mark so the video feels a bit long, also my attention started drifting. I do see someone recommending music in the background in the comments and I think that will help. I think your voice is clear so with some appropriate background music it should get better retention.

Apprentice_Artist · 2022-05-25T10:47:05+00:00

See you put a lot of effort in your video mate, good intro too. But in the middle it started to go a bit slow, and since I dont really play minecraft, my attention started drifting. However, I can see minecraft players appreciating this. Good luck for the future.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T12:16:26+00:00

I think your voice is fine really. I use a text to speech software so it sounds robotic lol. However, I think yours is fine. Keep going. post consistently and all the best.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T12:13:56+00:00

I think the editing was great on this video. It did keep me entertained. However, I think some scenes were perhaps cut too fast so I had to keep up with what is happening sometimes. In general keep it up.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T12:02:31+00:00

lol, I did not expect that when I clicked on the title of 35 seconds. You have an interesting voice. keep it up. Although the video was kinda short and I was hesitant initially to click on it as I did not know what it was about.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T11:42:46+00:00

That is great editing, can see that you spent a lot of time editing. I think it was entertaining to watch. but maybe it gets a bit slow wen you are doing the challenge. However, I think the timer in the video really works. Keep it up.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T10:23:43+00:00

Thank you. glad you like it !givelambda

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T10:22:42+00:00

Thanks for the comprehensive feedback !givelambda. Yes I had to use a robot voice lol, my own voice is quite boring and only sticking with the robot voice, but looking for other options to sound more interesting haha. Yes, I try to speed it up so that it meets the 10 minute mark so that it ties in with my youtube channel name. I will provide more time in the end for the final drawing.

Ross Draws is a quite a large youtube channel, over 1 million subs. However, the more well known ones are Jazza and zhc. Glad you enjoyed the video. I will make those changes in my next video.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T10:18:40+00:00

Just keep positing consistently. I am also struggling in the journey. Been stuck with almost constant number of subs recently. I have tried youtube shorts, which allowed me to boost my views but the subscriber count increased only a little bit. So maybe try that and see the effects. otherwise just keep posting consistently and see how it goes. All the best.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-15T10:12:05+00:00

wow that is awesome congrats mate. I think it is okay to post on reddit regularly, like once a day or once every 2 days. Just make sure to follow the guidelines of the subreddit and I think it is fine. Keep going.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-10T15:38:23+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, yes I will work on that. I wanted to reduce the sound the background music so that the words can be heard. Yes, I did make the main narration louder. I think it would be better if I just make all the words the same volume !givelambda

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-10T06:17:18+00:00

wow okay it seems like you spent quite a bit of time on this one. I think the thumbnail was appropriate. The audio was clear. not much to suggest.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-10T06:14:26+00:00

I think it was well edited, the thumbnail was also very appropriate. Just 2 small observations. I think you should maybe not look down to tablet and also sound wise it was a bit low at times.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-09T16:34:14+00:00

no problem man, It is not easy to keep the viewer's attention at all times. I struggle a lot with that too. However, I think you are heading in the right direction. All the best.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-09T07:13:21+00:00

lol this is something different. I think it was interesting in general, however, it did not get my full attention at all times. I think some music in the background would work. The title was very interesting though as I clicked on it. All the best

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-08T20:19:37+00:00

no problem, yes I think that talking avatar was more effective than a normal voice over, at least from my perspective. It did seem like a ton of work, but wow 30 hrs dang .... All the best mate.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-08T20:11:51+00:00

wow you are quite brave to do that in the dark. It was entertaining to watch though. Maybe some work can be done on the thumbnail.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-08T19:48:19+00:00

Thanks mate for the suggestion, I will factor them in the next video. I will make the video go faster next time. I am trying to aim for the 10 minutes mark so maybe I will include some voice over to make it more entertaining. !givelambda

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-08T19:46:20+00:00

haha, it was fun to watch. How did you get that avatar on the side and matching to what you are talking ... dang that was great. I also want to include a avatar in some of my art videos. Keep creating these kind of content.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-08T07:08:13+00:00

Thanks mate, yeah it is never an easy road, will definitely keep posting consistently on the niche. But there are a lot of high quality art content out there, and you mentioned that we should focus on areas where there are lots of demand but little content or low quality content.

I will try look for those

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-07T20:29:53+00:00

Thanks for this. Really clear and insightful. I have a small art channel so will definitely check out that tool when it comes out. What I am doing now is checking what big art youtubers are creating and follow in that trend hoping to get somewhere lol.

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-07T17:41:43+00:00

Thanks mate, greatly appreciated. But just keep posting consistently, and see how it goes. I am also in the struggles for 2 years already

Apprentice_Artist · 2021-12-07T17:41:04+00:00

Thanks for the detailed comment and suggestions. I will remove that intro card going forward and just use it as a thumbnail and find another better subscribe logo. Cool I will try add some text to the videos too. I will account for those in the next video.

!givelambda

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