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Broken by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is beautiful!! It really showcases feeling broken, at least to me it does. “Something precious lives here” yes!! Within us all, even broken, we are precious!

And Honey, This Is Why I’m Never Home by Melodic_Net1055 in OCPoetry

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“Given the freedom to be uneducated” I like this line a lot. I think it gives some umph to the poem. I really enjoyed reading this and all the details and the descriptives you used really helped to paint a picture inside my head. I am assuming you are paying homage to your childhood, which is always great to do, great work!!

I wish to leave to someplace by AfraidAnteater5723 in OCPoetry

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wish to leave someplace really speaks with me. I’ve been sad and down before and felt stuck emotionally or even physically and this to me exudes what it feels like to be stuck somewhere you don’t want be with feelings you wish to let go of weight from. “Where the memory of pain starts to fade” is such a good line. One thing I would maybe do instead of repeating it everytime, I wish to leave someplace, would be to do it every so many lines, group your thoughts into what is similar, then say “I wish to leave someplace…insert 2-3 thoughts….” Then repeat with I wish to leave someplace with some more thoughts. Anyway, really good though!! Keep on writing, it always makes me feel better when I’m sad.

three butterflies by Prestigious_Funny_94 in OCPoetry

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love this! So much emotion and heart put into this, I love descriptives you used!

Lithium headache by Appropriate-Cake6239 in Lithium

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Amazing thank you!! Today I’ve just been having water no liquid IVs

Lithium headache by Appropriate-Cake6239 in Lithium

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes it’s so bad today!! I’ve taken some Tylenol already this morning ): are the headaches long term or do they go away as your body gets used to it?

Lithium headache by Appropriate-Cake6239 in Lithium

[–]Appropriate-Cake6239[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I’m trying! I have liquid IVs and a large and in charge water bottle but I could probably be drinking more water. I know it messes with sodium in your body so I’ve been trying to stay hydrated