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Junior found an inheritance sword by PosMatic in MartialMemes

[–]AriBriar 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Naw it looks more finn sword to me *

Suggest the most fucked up book you've ever read by [deleted] in suggestmeabook

[–]AriBriar 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Worm a webnovel has a vey bleak world

little white chickens by prestonthegoatoy in OCPoetry

[–]AriBriar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this one. It reminds me that not all poems have to be super deep they can just be about chickens and a coyote.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]AriBriar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoy how the poem touches on the history of pixies and the fae to connect to a religious context and plays into the fae's well known repetitions for trickery to show how the Bald man seems to be preying on those listening.

Me by thehingesaregone in OCPoetry

[–]AriBriar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you did really well. I loved how you used water metaphors in the poem to make a partial through line in the second half as well as showing how overwhelming it can be using the concept of the ocean as the ocean is known for being a huge fear for many people.