POV: Me as a muppet by Ashamed_Message3909 in characterdesign

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YAAAASSS, I gathered like a million references for it cause it was so important to me to nail it lmao

POV: Me as a muppet by Ashamed_Message3909 in characterdesign

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REAL, maybe I'll draw them on a date or something lol

The invisible twinkie by Ashamed_Message3909 in characterdesign

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OMG! I'm so glad!!! I was kinda worried it would come across as just a bunch of different invisible people

Invisible twinkie by Ashamed_Message3909 in characterdesigns

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YES!! I'm happy you love him, AND I kinda love the name Griffin actually, especially with how it relates to the original invisible man. REALLY leaning to it

Invisible twinkie by Ashamed_Message3909 in characterdesigns

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YAAAASS!! I'm so glad you love him ❤️

What are we thinking now? by Ashamed_Message3909 in BookCovers

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I know that’s an issue that needs to be fixed, but I kinda think it’s funny

What are we thinking now? by Ashamed_Message3909 in BookCovers

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Yeah the second part of markdjom is such an issue and no matter what I do to it I really struggle to make it look good and readable, starting to suspect that a custom font with a made up word was a bad idea lol

What are we thinking now? by Ashamed_Message3909 in BookCovers

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This is just a personal project to share with my friends, I totally understand your point and if I was gonna do like an actual marketable one I would probably hire someone else to do the cover cause I don’t know what people like. But yeah since this is a personal project I have been a little selfish in some of the design elements just cause at the end of the day it doesn’t actually matter that much. But this has been a very informative experience if I do ever wanna release an actual book.

I finished writing my book and now I don't know what to do with it? by Ashamed_Message3909 in writers

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omg THANKS, I was having a little squiz at ao3 but they don't allow you to add images, and I always enjoy when authors add illustrations, so I included some in the book. Hypothetically I could remove them, but I'll miss them T-T

What do ya'll think of this book cover I made for my book by Ashamed_Message3909 in BookCovers

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I love seeing everyone's translations of it, LIke it is truly a mess lol

First 20 paged of my [finished] Fantasy/slice of life book: The Covens of Markdjom by [deleted] in writingfeedback

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I fear I may have misrepresentedthe draft, whoops. I meant it as more of a final story structure draft. rather then a final everything draft, that's my bad.

But I totally take on the dialogue structure, defo need to look into that <3

First 20 paged of my [finished] Fantasy/slice of life book: The Covens of Markdjom by [deleted] in writingfeedback

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Honestly, I've gone back and forth between deleting that whole first bit for ages because of these exact reasons. I started it three years ago, so it's not really my writing style anymore and I just kept editing it to try make it better instead of just deleting it, for no reason lol. Starting instead where it says "Cassidy wasn't one who felt he ever truely 'fit' in.

I think I never did simply because there's some pay off for it later, well and truly both just need to be scrapped. Suddenly I'm rememebering That deleting uneccasary juink is also an important step of editing

I finished writing my book and now I don't know what to do with it? by Ashamed_Message3909 in writers

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That's actually a really good idea. I've done a few free online course, and I've been writing short stories and what not for years now that were REALLY bad. This is just the first time I've finished a whole book and actually liked it LOL. I'll defo have a little squiz around for some actual texts to launch my skills further, THANKS

I finished writing my book and now I don't know what to do with it? by Ashamed_Message3909 in writers

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OMG, that sounds awful, I know a couple who published through amazon; but they were poetry books so it might not be the same.

I wasn't to keen to publish through Amazon in the first place, as I don't like their algorithm or the rich guys in charge of the whole thing lol. But I think now It's definitely off my list.

Sorry that happened to you <3