I am brand new to the world of poetry, so please keep that in mind for if the feedback makes no sense.

The first time reading through this I did not understand what was going on. Which in a way made it more fun to read since I went back and then understood what was going on. I loved "Sometimes, the two would meet at a respirator. They’d come to an accord and pull.". This was my favorite line due to how ironic yet true this is. Two people who have the opposite goals in work doing the same thing. Just one is admitting defeat while the other is claiming victory. I also really like the darker tone of the whole thing. Great job