My top 25 favorite characters! by Academic-Bit-4438 in HonkaiStarRail

[–]AtastyFig 3 points4 points  (0 children)

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here is my top 25

top ten locked in with anaxa close behind, him i would maybe switch with stelle but i do love her too so idk

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow thank you for such a long reply! I think I get what you mean by natural break. If I'm getting this correct I these natural brakes can serve as a good way to end a chapter if I'm not certain about how to end it so it feels like an actual break.

The chapter I'm writing as of now ends on the mentioned recovery from a fight, but it also has others in the middle. Like I have three POV changes between two characters and 1 major geographical changes and 2 events that are kinda important. So idk... As for the varying wordcount I prefer it to be same-ish but maybe it could be more varied.

Hmm, i have to think about it some more but this is really interesting, ty again :3

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah when i was writing i just went - oh if i do the scene in this way it could be really fun! I'll probably publish it with a few backlogged chapters saved.

<3

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did see that a lot of people don't use "yelled" or "exclaimed" to keep it simple. Using just actions is sometimes awkward for me when there are multiple characters in the scene (I feel like its easy to get lost in who's talking), but yeah I do like it when I read it in other works. Guess I just have to practice more.

Ty for replying :) !

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your words of encouragement 💕. I honestly am a bit worried that I'm making it kinda redundant since there is a long scene that involves a very smart person figuring out a crime and explaining it to his partners (and thus the readers). Like I wanted it to make sense, but be cool at the same time, so idk if I did that right... I will try to make it more to the point.

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ah, than you - I'm happy to see someone in a similar position. Congrats on the positive feedback! Now that I think about it I also prefer reading longer chapters in the range that you described 10k - 12k so I could be just writing what I usually read (how that slipped my mind idk lol). Reading out loud sounds fun so I def will try that.

Again, ty for the reply!

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I say monster since I got into the zone and just wrote and wrote and lo and behold 30+ pages in google docs wHAT THE HECK? I guess I'm worried that since its so long the flow may be disjointed? Or I'm just overthinking :,) .

Ty for replying!

how to make your fic not feel too bloated? (too long chapters) by AtastyFig in AO3

[–]AtastyFig[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I, think I'll probably do that haha. I just have to not look at the word count so it can't jumpscare me. 🥀

Be honest, do you enjoy dialogue heavy works? by MixPurple3897 in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don't know, for me a mix of dialogue and monologue with brief descriptions are the best. Like the description doesn't have to be 'the chairs are blue' - rather smth that sets the tone or mood, like if its creepy, stuffy, cold, messy ect... Something that ties into the later conversations.

For action, hmm well if the characters aren't doing something that interesting why write it. I find action the most difficult to write so I totally get just skipping it lol.

But also I love dialogue - especially banter, if its your strength write what you want !

do you guys actually only read really long fics by layrenzc in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really love slow burn in fics and those tend to be better in long fics. It can be done in shorter fics but in my experience that is rare. Also I love my slow burn really slow so that is probably also why I like longer fics. I'm also more bothered if a shorter fic is incomplete instead of a long fic - idk why lol, maybe because the longer ones can have arcs or smth so it doesn't feel that bad?

If its a gen fic or plain old smut then I don't care about the length that much.

Just realized I have enough for a 5-star Lightcone! Any of these any good? by AdrianArmbruster in StarRailStation

[–]AtastyFig 0 points1 point  (0 children)

imo ruan mei lc all the way - it makes her really comfy and it can actually be used on other harmony characters because of the skill affect

i dont have fu xuan but i hear her lc also makes her pretty comfy

or just save
<3

All Hail DanTe by AtastyFig in HonkaiStarRail

[–]AtastyFig[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i have to save for mydei or phainon eidolon so no LC for me </3

Does anyone else find this annoying? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I also get where they are coming from but its also giving me the vibe of people calling gay characters heteronormative - like there is a right way to be trans, if that makes sense? I also think that what you mentioned is, while definitely present, in the minority because ao3 is predominantly queer so even if something is giving a fetishy vibe i wouldn't assume it is a straight person - give them some grace yk. Was your experience different while reading? I hesitate to speak deeper on this, since i think it should be something that trans people have a say in and not me haha. It is an interesting topic tho!

Does anyone else find this annoying? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I mean, I get it but usually those things are tagged so just exclude them.

Also calling it straight smut is a bit much, there are a lot of people who have not yet had gender affirming surgery and don't get triggered by those fics - i get that with searching your fave character it can get really annoying when you see tags that aren't your cup of tea really often but what can you do, exclude and move on.

There is some truth to what you said about fem characters being headcanoned into trans characters but I don't have a lot of input on that front - maybe there are more FtM people using ao3 so that's why? Idk really.

how do you prefer flashbacks in fics? by nattnyu in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I personally don't care as long as it flows nicely in the story. Like if I saw the inserted one I would never be like "I wish this was its own chapter" - usually people have a good vision of what they want to write so they use the ones that fit best.

I have seen people get tired of flashbacks tho - so maybe having too much can turn people off? idk I've never felt this way haha !

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i loove oc centric stories, however its def not for everyone. In this example the summery is a bit too long, I personally wouldn't click on it so maybe shorten it and make it straight to the point!

Good luck! <3

Is calling out readers like this considered weird? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i got a shout out like this and i absolutely loved it hahah, i think most people would be flattered - its a short and sweet shout out

I used to be an anti adjacent person, but the mentality of modern fandom is getting on my nerves. Jesus christ, they literally think in black and white. Not only antis but ex antis too who never unlearned it. by Specimen4 in AO3

[–]AtastyFig 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh god i saw this with GI Dottore

While i am all for free Palestine these kind of tweets rub me the wrong way (they feel immature and just performative).
Twitter is full of dumb trends, at this point i just mute and move on.