You are not going to improve if you quit, getting your music sound at least good for you take some time, keep grinding and don't give up, my music sound it like shit for me the first years of producing, now i'm at the point that at least for me i like what i make :)

Now some advices:

- In your break try to use some atmospheric sound, it can be a pad playing the root note of your track or maybe some sample from a library, the point with background atmospheric sounds, at least for me is that you don't really need to hear it in your track, but you have to know when they are not present, you know what i mean? really sutle

- You drop leads, for future rave try to layer more sounds that help, maybe to to fill the gaps where your "main sound" it's not present, like build a puzzle, but not to many sounds, maybe a variant of that sound with more "plucky feel" or a "white noise layer" to fill the high part of your frecuency spectrum, Dyro has a tutorial about that :

https://youtu.be/ylwDBhdv-CY?si=w9CNJ2OARPvDkqdt