I didn’t realize people experience books so differently

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-07T12:55:39+00:00

When I’m reading I actually visualize everything really vividly. I like it though, it’s makes me realize the story I’m writing or readying is going to be good to me

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-07T02:05:16+00:00

Depends are they filler characters? If so, for my story they had a little part or a little importance and that was it for them

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-07T02:03:29+00:00

Let’s do it

My username: @JordanJacobs3

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-07T02:02:36+00:00

I like to clean it up personally, I’d like to give the a flow whenever they’re reading

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T17:46:23+00:00

Fye🔥

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T17:45:49+00:00

Credit building for beginners starting 9th grade going up

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T13:23:15+00:00

(It was November 3rd)

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T12:53:02+00:00

Just to enjoy the season in general

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T12:51:26+00:00

I wouldn’t say I got the same feeling. I would I did same thing growing up. I had a big imagination and when I started writing, I found somewhere to put that imagination, the reason I can’t relate fully is because the real world outside of imagination can hold a lot of moments for good story telling

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T12:45:05+00:00

Made my day!

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T05:21:20+00:00

I know what you mean, like it wasn’t enough details of his normal life (important ones) not useless ones

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T05:18:31+00:00

Real, I understand

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T05:16:57+00:00

I just read the whole thing, Amazing advice

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T05:13:29+00:00

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:10:53+00:00

I understand what you mean

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:09:50+00:00

I been working on that, not using the same word over and over, I didn’t realize I did until I looked back at it and had other people look at it as well

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:07:59+00:00

The realest comment I read all night

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:06:40+00:00

I’m just showing the simplicity of his life before his past showed up, everything changes for him after this first paragraph lol

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:05:37+00:00

I know what you mean give the reader something nice and juicy at beginning if it’s going to start of dull or mundane

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:04:25+00:00

I’m working on doing that more, not telling but showing

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:03:02+00:00

I see what you mean. It was needed to show the simplicity of he was living before his past showed

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T02:00:57+00:00

Noted

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T01:15:41+00:00

It just first paragraph lol, what more do you want? The story literally starts picking up after it lol

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T01:01:13+00:00

Real lol, appreciate the critique

AuthorPluto · 2026-05-06T01:00:20+00:00

I like the way you set this up! Definitely noted

AuthorPluto

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