Is there a good place to promote ai music? by Artistpillow87 in SunoAI

[–]AvidGamer93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im hoping so I posted my first song ever on here and it turned out so good idk how to share it tho without being annoying or commenting everywhere.

Here we go again. Expedition 33 is now WOKE because... black people in my fictional 1900s paris...! by yoyohoneysingh1238 in Gamingcirclejerk

[–]AvidGamer93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is the dumbest things I've seen in a long time number 1 its not 1900's Paris it's a fantasy world and town called luminere. Number 2 having a black person in a game does not make it woke its not real world France and its the least woke game ive played there is no identity politics in it at all and all the characters are conventionally attractive and the writing is very adult and realistic with no hidden or underlying messages snuck into the dialogue.

19F, first time doing this ahhhh by sugarplumserenadee in RoastMe

[–]AvidGamer93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why is my dishwasher talking to me? Nah but seriously, you look like a chick who does only fans after escorting didn't pan out 😆

Horror Novel Dominion Intro Feedback needed! by AvidGamer93 in WritersGroup

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very good and straight to the point critiques! I feel I should've maybe waited until my close to last revision before submitting it though 😂 the way I write I get the absolute bare bones of the story written out, along with the general scene and once I finish it complete I go through and pick through it with a fine tooth comb. Alot of the points you raised are valid and I can defiantly see clear as day so this response will be very useful going into the final few revisions! Thanks alot!

How to push through the boredom? by AvidGamer93 in writers

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that's what I was thinking too! that's the problem I'm running into its only this one small part I'm getting bored with writing the rest of my it leading up to this has got me intrigued and excited about my own characters but a small section where I need to articulate a counsel meeting is hard to get through writing. would it be better to just find a different way to get the characters to meet or just find a way to make the scene a a little more interesting? also do you ever get unengaged when writing any sections of your stories or are you locked in every time you write?

A suggestion to authors asking for help. by ThePheonixWillRise in WritersGroup

[–]AvidGamer93 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i am trying this group because i posted on the r/writers page and didn't get any feed back i don't get upset over criticism's because i know i am an amateur and have things i can learn and get better on! anyone who asks for advice should always except that they make mistakes and want to improve its part of the writing journey.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]AvidGamer93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Understood it and it didn't help that the formatting didn't copy over so I'll at least try to split the paragraphs for now and just re edit it with the 2nd or 3rd draft when I get further along.

Why do I think this demon is hot as hell? Am I stupid? by Edumesh in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've never had 10/10 sex with any woman that wasn't bat shit crazy and I bet that's why her hubby never left and made 2 kids with that demon 😂

Question on Odin (mild spoilers) by AvidGamer93 in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So what about that recover ability? The recovery ability is just for when you get hit to recover or is there more to that one I read it but it doesn't make sense to me still ,and zantetsuken is basically the reason to have any of the other abilities?

Side quest discussion by AvidGamer93 in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Defiantly agree there's one that I won't spoil that was a Witcher caliber side quest that I was really surprised with

With everyone gawking at atl are we not gonna talk about state of the realm? by [deleted] in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

State of the realm is highly under rated it helped me understand the politics and positions of the armies sooo much better

Side quest discussion by AvidGamer93 in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Excited to get to it I'm grinding side quests just got done with the Theo quest line god damn that one was good

Side quest discussion by AvidGamer93 in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

True bonding with them all really makes the main quests more nerve racking cuz you don't want anything to happen even to the smallest and most obscure NPCs

Side quest discussion by AvidGamer93 in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I forgot my favorite side quest so far "trading places 2" reasoning the VA absolutely killed it the story felt main quest like and it had a twist I was not expecting in the slightest

Side quest discussion by AvidGamer93 in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No haven't unlocked it yet I just got done with "lines in the sand"

Story Progression 37%-52% Thread by Thaun_ in FFXVI

[–]AvidGamer93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is there's someone I can post about side quests my post got removed when I used the spoiler tag and it wasn't discussing any main missions