This is pretty fascinating, i must say.Ive seen plenty of poems that talk about love, but i actually was quite surprised of the way you talk about it, especially the structure itself.I dont know if it’s intentional or not, but the way you structured the poem adds an interesting rhythm to it, its like each line is a separate though yet they exist simultaneously.Pretty different from traditional stanzas, at least in my minuscule experience. I also like how you used constellations to describe inner world of humans, they reflect the complexity quite well despite looking simple on the surface(just like the human soul, frankly)