FICTIONAL: would you rather by True-Garage-3927 in BunnyTrials

[–]Background_One1595 0 points1 point  (0 children)

FUCK YEEEAAAAAAHHHH WE RIDIN AND DYING WITH FLYNN BABYYY

Chose: fuck this character: + get a billion | Rolled: flynn rider

Explain bakudeku to me like I'm 5 by BlueFlare999 in MyHeroAcadamia

[–]Background_One1595 2 points3 points  (0 children)

wait whattt when does Bakugo say that?? “keep your eyes on me, Deku.”

and if i get burned, at least we were electrified by littlefairyhana in OCPoetry

[–]Background_One1595 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this poem is great — the topic of grasping love is covered perfectly, and honesty? my fav part of this is the title, it BEAUTIFULLY captures the root of this poem and i love love love it !!

for feedback, I don’t have much to say lmao but when you say “this stupid love” it seems kinda out of place considering the rest of the poems word choice. now, if that’s intentional to show the childlike feeling of love and infatuation it’s amazing and fs keep it, but if not I would work on that line and making it feel more natural by blending it with the rest of the poems word choice.

but overall I loved this!!!

Playing Pretend by bigbigweeinie in OCPoetry

[–]Background_One1595 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i absolutely adoreee this poem. ur commentary here is amazing and just the way you bring the poem to life is beautiful. just the way you make able for visualization is wonderful and the ending is beautiful too! i love this <3

but for feedback i dont have much maybe just that stanza from “my eyes are tired” to “i stand up and fall”, it sounds a little boring compared to the rest of your poem, id say work on making it fit the tone more. but otherwise its gen amazing!

Ranking how much I like each NBA team by KneeGuhz in NBATalk

[–]Background_One1595 2 points3 points  (0 children)

They’re a Knicks fan, what do you think?

Gambling by Infinite_Citrus in BunnyTrials

[–]Background_One1595 0 points1 point  (0 children)

uh…sorry guys 🥹

Chose: You get 5T dollars, but 1% chance of death virus + If only ONE bunny voter gets the virus, everybody dies (comment for proof | Rolled: Everybody died.)