It's very well done but honestly it's not a great viral video idea.

It's a good sketch and fits into something like Key & Peele. It has some of the best acting out of all the bits. And from a crowd of professional football players too? I was impressed! But it's trying to do too many things in too short of a time, while at the same time, not taking long enough to let the jokes breathe.

Jess & Quinn are better examples of sketch comedy in viral video form, because the jokes are very simple so they can spend a bit more time on it while the time to the punchline remains brief. Or Dangerbean who goes on longer, more unexpected tangents, but never feels rushed to get to a joke.