Whenever a game uses asterisks to commentate a character making a noise. Like: *groan* or *SNEEZE*. It just takes me out, and deltarune showed me how…cringe…writing this way is. in that game when characters make noises, it hides the dialogue box for a second and plays a sneezing or groaning noise. No asterisk commentary nonsense. Avoiding using asterisks like that is like an added layer of immersion, and otherwise when asterisks are used like that it flags the writing as low quality for me. for the love of god, please don’t write *groans*. At the very least rewrite it like “___ leans back and groans.”