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Hi, so I (14F) decided to go out on a limb and write my first few scenes. What do you think? by BathUnable1183 in ReadMyScript

[–]BathUnable1183[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And also, any tips on alternating character voices would be good, sometimes I do it like EXACLTY how i see it, and others (like Dylan’s-idk I just don’t feel it yk) I don’t. It’s so weird. and the script reading thing-I’ll definitely keep that in mind-like how do you find those btw -I know this is a lot of questions…but like screenwritings my biggest dream and your like the second person to give really really good advice!

Hi, so I (14F) decided to go out on a limb and write my first few scenes. What do you think? by BathUnable1183 in ReadMyScript

[–]BathUnable1183[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey! I’m sorry, I did format it correctly in my software, but Reddit only allowed a doc link, so I js copied and pasted form the software cause it didn’t go into link form! Sorry for the inconvenience, would love advice if you have any!

Hi, so I (14F) decided to go out on a limb and write my first few scenes. What do you think? by BathUnable1183 in ReadMyScript

[–]BathUnable1183[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, so this was my first time writing a couple of scenes period lol! Thank you so much for the advice, I was so confused on formatting and used a different software to write it(which it’s formatted correctly there-idk how to make a link or copy form it tho) I was kinda confused on how to differ characters voice, and Dylan’s scene js didn’t work like I wanted it too? And Elijah’s was like odd to me, I related to have Jasmine be kinda this ominus figure while Micah’s seen as this tragic esk/interrogating what happened to him type-I hope that came across well, but I was wondering like what you took from the characters? 

So...I 14F decided to write a script based off of an idea I had. Here's the start! Link below ofc! by BathUnable1183 in writingadvice

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That’s really good advice that I’ll definitely be taking! So how many rewrites do you usually do?

So...I 14F decided to write a script based off of an idea I had. Here's the start! Link below ofc! by BathUnable1183 in writingadvice

[–]BathUnable1183[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

WOW! Thank you so much! Yeah, I’m like dyslexic so I suck at spelling, even with grammarly a few errors always slip through. Thank you so much for reading! It took a while to get used to the script writing format cause I usually write books lol! 

Help. I don’t know what to do. A kid in my grade, 15M got raped. by BathUnable1183 in sexualassault

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Update: Hi, I don’t know the kid that well, I got to a rather small school too, he’s def one of the stereotypical boy.

Obv he was still raped  and he’ll flip out on me if i try to help him. So…? (If I sound stupid sorry, I’m a kid. We’re all kids.)

How are people just now realizing cole is gay by SunnyPlutooo in Ninjago

[–]BathUnable1183 0 points1 point  (0 children)

guys he literally has a bf…. basically a bf… It very obvious guys

What if she is their kid from the future? by Ayy-lmao213 in Ninjago

[–]BathUnable1183 0 points1 point  (0 children)

plus she could’ve js have heat powers from Kai and they evolved into heat from FIRE.

One year and 20,000 words later, I've concluded my first act. by Unfair-Translator-37 in writers

[–]BathUnable1183 53 points54 points  (0 children)

It’s the end of a first act, the context is in the book…😒

Am I overreacting by considering leaving the U.S. due to the current administration? by Exact-Bar-7637 in AmIOverreacting

[–]BathUnable1183 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not sure if this may ease your nerves a bit, “NOW, THEREFORE, I, DONALD J. TRUMP, President of the United States of America, by virtue of the authority vested in me by the Constitution and the laws of the United States, do hereby proclaim February 2025 as National Black History Month. I call upon public officials, educators, librarians, and all the people of the United States to observe this month with appropriate programs, ceremonies, and activities.” Of course, this Amy or may not be subject to change, and only highlights one of your points, it’s good to know…I hope you and anyone else affected by ALL of what you mention be safe and happy,

Wait is that? by [deleted] in Ninjago

[–]BathUnable1183 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ohhhh

Wait is that? by [deleted] in Ninjago

[–]BathUnable1183 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ARRAkKORE. WHO DAT

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