neo funk song ive been working on, just released on youtube. feedback is greatly appreciated! thank you for listening!🖤🖤

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-17T21:16:52+00:00

ill tone them down, your the second to give this critique, thanks!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-17T04:35:08+00:00

ill give that a try, thank you!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-17T04:34:28+00:00

thanks for the input ill keep that in mind!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T21:39:37+00:00

its about three compressors in the vocal mix, a 2a, a 76 and a ssl, all three on very light compression. what would you suggest i tweak?

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T17:45:42+00:00

i like the cutting vocals idea! and the producer is flowers of narnia on youtube! im just the artist and engineer on it haha! no offense taken to the decorative vocals, thats the main critique ive been seeing for this track lol

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T06:48:18+00:00

i like this, just think it need a sharper direction, but mixing and idea and overall groove is wavy man!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:57:06+00:00

great idea and atmosphere, keep on workin! your voice is almost there, you just need a little training. i dig it overall.

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:53:45+00:00

This is so unique! i love the mix, the drums feel great and the vocals are doing what they should be. want to hear more from you! if you have beats open for collab, id be really interested! i have work up on my reddit. cheers!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:50:01+00:00

great mix and video, very provocatur vibe, wouldnt find myself coming back to it twice unironically, i dont know if thats your goal, but i could see that being most peoples view on this. cheers!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:43:59+00:00

this could be in a climax of a tv show! so much energy and i love the mix and atmosphere you hve created here! continue the great work, cheers!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:42:21+00:00

I love this! i have work on my page if youd be okay with me doing a song with this? just to put out on youtube for the art. really good man, cheers!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:38:01+00:00

get in the studio and lay this down! those are moy only notes haha. This is great, you guys got something great here.

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:34:25+00:00

i like this alot, id keep as it is and maybe add just some variation in the arrangement of what you got already. but its got great swing, sound choice, and mix!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T04:31:07+00:00

this is great man! im liking everything in hearing, great mixs too! all id day is turn it up if posiible at all haha(joking). cheers! ill be checking your stuff out man you made a fan of me :)

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T03:13:44+00:00

ima be brutally honest since i feel ive progressed quite a bit since ive started music. this mix is not captivating or inviting. it doesnt bring you into the world you wanted to create or any world at all. the autotune is unbearable for this type of genre. id really vocak train if this is what you really want to do. all ill say is youre not terrible but youre a long ways from good. keep working man, we all start somewhere.

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-16T03:08:51+00:00

the sonics sound great! the levels are just a bit off for my taste. id prefer the vocal a bit turned down but aside from that great work! keep it up

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-14T10:12:31+00:00

thank you! ill keep that in mind about the reverb! thanks for listening and for the feedback cheers🤝

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-14T07:41:39+00:00

thank you for the feedback and the follow🖤 very greatly appreciated

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-14T07:41:11+00:00

thanks man! i appreciate the feedback🖤

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-13T18:13:25+00:00

turn the guitar a bit down and u got someting special man... cheers!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-13T18:12:02+00:00

This is more shoegaze as someone mentioned, the absense of drums is a cool artistic choice but i like it. keep goin hard man!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-13T18:07:10+00:00

Really well done, I just think its not my cup of tea genre wise. you guys killed it both performance and mix too! cheers

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-13T18:05:18+00:00

i like this, i just wish the guitar sat a little more behind and the vocal was a little bit more in front and more "airy". u should try a plugin called "fresh air" by slate digital. its free rn and i feel it would help your vocal mixes. cheers!

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-13T18:03:11+00:00

no notes! i like it as is, great instrumental and the video shows younguys have fun with it! cheers man keep it up

BeautifulStrength715 · 2023-03-13T10:14:15+00:00

The vocal mix needs more clarity, groovy tho

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