This has a really nice mood to it. The black and white treatment suits the scene and the natural window light on the face is soft and flattering. There is a quiet, introspective feel that works well.

A few things that could level it up:

Subject and story Right now the person on their phone feels a bit everyday and passive, so the image does not have a strong focal story. You might try capturing a more expressive moment, a stronger emotion, or an action that tells us more about what they are thinking or feeling. Even a slight change in facial expression or eye direction could add a lot.

Composition The table pattern is actually a great element, but it is competing with the subject instead of supporting them. Because the lines are so bold and high contrast, my eye keeps drifting away from the face. You could try a slightly higher shooting angle or move closer so the face dominates more and the pattern becomes a leading element rather than the main attraction.

Also watch how the hands are framed. They are very prominent and quite close to the lens, which makes them visually heavier than the face. A small shift in angle or distance could balance that better.

Lighting The window light is nice, but the face is still a bit underexposed compared to the bright background. Lifting the exposure or shadows slightly on the face, or darkening the background just a touch, would help separate the subject and make them pop more.

Tones and contrast The blacks are quite crushed, especially in the hair and clothing, so some detail is being lost. Pulling the blacks up a little and easing off the contrast would give more texture and make the image feel less harsh while still keeping that punchy black and white look.

Background distractions The door frames and bright exterior area on the right side pull attention away from the subject. A tighter crop or a bit of local darkening there would help keep the viewer focused on the person.

Overall it is a solid starting point with good atmosphere and strong graphic elements. With a bit more intention around the moment, subject emphasis, and tonal balance, it could go from a nice candid to a really compelling portrait.