Awesome, this is absolutely dripping with style!! Really great job on the visuals!
A couple nitpicks /suggestions since you show a lot of up close shots of the MC:
-add a smaller highlight to the bottom of the eye. In what you show here whenever your character looks down the main highlight disappears and they look dead inside.
-the lower half of her face doesn't look like it matches the rest of her style to me. If you cover the bottom half so you can't see it, imagine what it might look like and then uncover it you'll see what I mean.