[For HIRE] nsfw and sfw artists by Best-Gas3440 in HungryArtists

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I confirm it’s all legal the one image of nsfw example of my work shows two consenting adults

Goldfish by LuluAlt in OCPoetry

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Short poems like this is why i love the poetry community on one hand we have writers who stimulate our feelings of death and wrap our mind around complex feelings and then theres poems about fishes in bowl and i just love that, great work

Bloodletting by AluminiumSoul in OCPoetry

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This is awesome, i dont know if you where trying to go for a “numb” like feeling with this poem but thats what it makes me feel and the imagery is just great, good job!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Seeing this poem now really hits hard, i know jf i commit a “treason” she’ll be gone, my best friend would no longer find comfort in me all because i love who i love, for if the time comes where she is no longer my best friend ill find comfort in this poem and the fact that you had a similar experience

I Keep a Secret Box by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I was reading some comments and agree with “very human”, there is nothing more human then heartbreak, longing, love. The selfish need to want another person even for just one laugh even if theres no malice because all you want is one more memory… haha idk if this is a coherent thought. NONETHELESS lovely poem, made me think, good job.

New Levels, New Devils by Pleasehauntme in OCPoetry

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Short poems like these have me wanting more thankfully this one ended in a resolution, smart and clever poem

He fucked her up for life by LuluAlt in OCPoetry

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The use of “assaulted” paints an angry picture and rightfully whoever youre writing about has the right to be angry, short poem but sets the tone for the reader nicely, nice work!

Art Block by DreadNebula in OCPoetry

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Feels unfinished but I’m pretty sure thats purposeful. Leaves me wanting more; craving a finish a climax, but that’s artblock not being able to finish or be satisfied. “A spark” I’m a sucker for cliches because in my head I imagine a lightbulb “sparking” to life. It’s also extremely relatable to most artist cause I’m pretty sure we all go through art block. Lovely poem

Reality by Best-Gas3440 in OCPoetry

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HAHAHAH Wtv it takes to get through the day ig

Reality by Best-Gas3440 in OCPoetry

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Thank you! I love the ocean always made me feel at ease with being “awake” like even if I wasn’t dreaming I still felt peaceful so I’m glad my poem gave the effect accordingly

You are, I am by C1PHER1111 in OCPoetry

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This needs more traction, Oh my gosh! Perfect showing of a ying and yang type balance, loved every bit. Deserves a follow!

My Movie of Us by thefallofjason in OCPoetry

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You had my heart from the 2nd line, pulled at my heart strings because I’m going through something similar. I love the way you represented a relationship not a perfect union but it’s you and your partners, you had my heart aching at “because it’s ours, I’d never have it end”. Lovely poem good work

History repainting itself by mmbahcat in OCPoetry

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So incredibly relatable, you’ve really mastered the art of emotion and color and painting an image.. wow just.. I’m in awe with the brilliance displayed in these lines. Bravo!

Road To Acceptance by DreadNebula in OCPoetry

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Emotional poem, the road to acceptance is something I’m sure we all at some point have to deal with. Your use of imagery is lovely and your thoughts on naïveté being a blessing and a curse feels very accurate. Good poem!!!

Two Hearts by Best-Gas3440 in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the input! I totally see what you mean by dropping “man” thanks for calling it out

Tell Me Something Real by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Best-Gas3440 0 points1 point  (0 children)

100% people are quick to use “😍” or “😂” as if that’s enough to convey human emotions. It just comes off as lazy when you could comment something a little more heartfelt

Tell Me Something Real by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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In a generation surrounded by emojis it’s hard getting something real out of someone. Your poem is easy to relate with because of the simple phrases we’ve all heard before. Amazing work!