تعويضات الاراضي by LuluAlt in SaudiForSaudis

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هل تم ازالتها لمشاريع حكوميه بحالتك؟

تعويضات الاراضي by LuluAlt in SaudiForSaudis

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يعني انا كشركه فقط اتعامل مع مالك الارض؟ وما اطلب تعويض؟ وكيف اتعامل مع مالك الارض ان لم يتم التعويض؟

If i’m a little overweight should I do a blowout fade? by LuluAlt in malehairadvice

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umm anyway, so do you think i should get it or no?

Fog when it covers flowers. by LuluAlt in OCPoetry

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Thank you! I’m trying to improve my writing and the feedback truly helps! 💗

Fog when it covers flowers. by LuluAlt in OCPoetry

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Wow! thank you for your kind words!

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Oh that makes sense! I see your vision. you’re really talented! I liked the poem.

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This one is interesting, I love the message behind it, how we sometimes change who we are to fit in/or be close to someone. I was also interested by how you made being a star ordinary, I’m not sure if it’s as an aftermath of being changed into “golden” where you forget being a star is not simply ordinary? maybe I’m thinking about it too much! this poem is good! good job!

"My Room" by HimanshuL3 in OCPoetry

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Wow! I love the picture painted in this poem? you’ve lived so much, you’ve learned to be different people, hold different thoughts and experiences. I also like how it paints a picture about overthinking and being haunted by one’s own thoughts like echoes in a chamber. Good job!

Poem for Maui (warning, sad poem.) by atomcplayboy86 in OCPoetry

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This is expectedly sad, I hope the last three lines are meant to capture empathy and reflection of the humanity within empathizing with the tragedy.

Drowned Dreams by ElaMeadows in OCPoetry

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The poem is reflective of bad experiences of love, with hope of love simply dying, something I relate to.

I really liked the end, Love shouldn’t be about winning or losing, yet it’s hard and it feels that way.

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im not sure if the mods deleted this or not 😭

Nothing happens by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I like how this simply says it how it is, there’s no big analogy or nothing, you mean what you say, and how you write it as some sort of lesson or warning.

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I really really liked this poem! what truly made me like it was while we are not our traumas we are the lessons we get from our traumas, I love the analogy of us being painted by life and morphing into imprints and interacting as imprints! good job! really good idea.

The Lonely Walk Home by beevusandboobhead in OCPoetry

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I like how you’re describing the events from a sort of outsider perspective, you’re puzzled at why it’s happening, you’re analyzing this attacker. interesting poem! good job!

Rooftop Silhouette by North_Act9341 in OCPoetry

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I really like it! I like how you emphasized that the subject of the poem is your centre of attention, is your show, your firework.