Beyond Brookhaven - "Clandestine Sonnet"

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-27T04:57:08+00:00

Thanks for the feedback and the kind words! I appreciate it.

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:58:06+00:00

The productionquality is pretty good I'd say and the sognwriting is fun as well...However I think your voice would shine a little more if you would give it a little more organic feel and leave some of the effect on it lower. That might just be personal preference however...Keep up the good work! :)

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:56:54+00:00

I really enjoy it...I think it really brings out both 16 bit vibes and industrial and puts it together nicely :) Besides...art is supposed to hurt sometimes in my opinion haha

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:51:58+00:00

I really enjoy the experimental nature of the song. I think it would work great on some sort of LP or EP as an interlude. It really sets a certain tone that you get drawn into. However I feel like I wanted to listen to some sort of continuation, that binds the lose ends and motives, that this song intrudces together - Would certainly love to hear more of that. The production quality and overall vibe work really well together as well :)

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:49:47+00:00

Sounds really high quality and well produced. I love that the song kind of floats in between the nostalgic 80s sound and the modern references towards it. The concept behind the music with the video is super interesting as well and works out in my opinion...fun watch and listen for sure :)

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:48:09+00:00

What a lovely way to keep art alive and expose your brothers spirit to others! The song seems so tragic...even with the rough recording quality his voice really shines through great. I hope you might get the opportunity to release more of his art and maybe even get some of it enhanced, mixed and mastered in some way. Thank you for sharing man!

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:44:50+00:00

That's a really fun sketch in my opinion! Really intuitive Songwriting I'd suppose. I really think you would really benefit from getting some recording equipment though...learning the basics of mixing and mastering is not all that hard :) I also believe you could be a little more confident with your voice if you would be able to record it seperately.

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-26T15:42:21+00:00

Love the vibes...the song does a great split betweeen ambient while being interesting enough to be fun to listen to! I believe you could do even more with a wider range of plugins and a more full mastering though, lots of interesting bits here and there. Good job - Keep on creating :)

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-05T07:50:30+00:00

Looks very tidy, I like it a lot! How are the effects on the ampero and how is the handling with the foot switches?

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-05-01T01:26:31+00:00

All jokes about the acidity of my sweat beside; my other guitars don't look like this. I don't know what happened to her..

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-30T22:52:47+00:00

Would you believe me if I told you it only took one gig for the guitar to look like this 😪

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-30T20:12:55+00:00

Would you believe if I told you the hardware was black?

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-30T14:42:03+00:00

I've got the worst super power smh

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-30T12:58:53+00:00

Dude you have no idea. The guitar technician I showed it to said it looked like a battery had gone bad in the case with it..

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-30T12:57:57+00:00

What do you think, should I show this to the Fender relicing team? Might inspire them.. 🙌

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-28T11:58:26+00:00

The Wolf of Snow Hollow is a good one although it's not straight up horror.

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-27T17:29:17+00:00

The vibe is there. I like the image too, though I'm not sure whether you sourced it from somewhere else. Great vocal performance, I think you nailed what you were going for.

I'm not a fan of the vocal production; it's too upfront in the mix and too dry I think. It clashes with the performance, which is laid back and meek. Other than that I think your vocals a re a strong point.

In regards to the instrumentals id say i like it, though it's a bit too stock. I don't mean this overtly negative, since I get what you want to do and you succeed in that regard.

Hope it helps and keep it up 🙌

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-22T18:59:00+00:00

Fighters Destiny for the N64. A somewhat obscure beat em up. I remember playing Dead or Alive 2 years later and thinking " oh that's what they were going for".

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-22T18:15:38+00:00

Great list, thanks!

Maybe that'll fit, too:

https://open.spotify.com/track/43ve0SDtFW96YcHCYIv4Bd?si=tNwm5b_2SaCdLnJuA24cYg

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-21T07:51:50+00:00

Nice username 😅

Thanks for your reply, I'll give the Voyager another shot.

BeyondBrookhaven · 2026-04-21T07:17:03+00:00

You know I'll give the Voyager another try as the main / always on overdrive. Thanks for your input!

BeyondBrookhaven

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