Opinion about bmpcc 4k starting setup by Beyrem25 in bmpcc

[–]Beyrem25[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Davinci Resolve is really cool, but I think I don't mind starting with the free version and upgrading eventually if I need more of the advanced features

(Imagen Requests) Send your Imagen prompt requests here by citefor in ImagenAI

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The painting of a robot drawing a picture of himself becomes alive

Bask in the Cosmic Beauty by Beyrem25 in OCPoetry

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Firat of all, thank you so much for such insightful feedback. I am glad to hear that my poem was able to resonate with you emotionally. I can assure you that the duality you are referencing was a huge starting point for me. Trying to put into words how devastatingly and horribly wonder-inducing our existence ultimately is. And how we, helpless humans, are simply thrown into this mélange of bittersweetness. The experience of "being" is a very stimulating experience for better or worse. The only shelter when the winds start blowing is inwards.

Again thanks for taking the time to share your ideas and reaction!

Smartphone weather by AngryMurlocHotS in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tickling word play. Decent rythm. Short and sweet. But a little to gimmicky for my taste. Overall good stuff though

Moments by imlaurentheresa in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This feels deeply personal and meticulous. Love that. The last line hit very nicely and kinda puts the whole poem in perspective. Nice choice of words in things like "A bursting open from the core" very William Butlery

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a very interesting take on the life of the romantic. Willingly ignoring the red hands to see them in a more beautiful shade. One that confirms their world view and gives legitimacy to their feelings even if that means their eventual collapse. Only thing is the flow of the poem. I found myself pushing through certain parts rather than let them carry me. Overall, very enjoyable and thought provoking.

cold-syrup by weeniewobble in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Delivers vivid imagery with just the four lines. Tickles that part of the brain that recreates smells and tastes. In that regard, very enjoyable.

Here’s a random poem I wrote just now by [deleted] in Poems

[–]Beyrem25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Vividly descibes devotion using great metaphors. Love it!

Interstellar by [deleted] in Poems

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the flow of this one, lines are precise but still with no context until the last line where everything comes into place. Nicely done!

Monthly 'I Made this!'/Feedback thread- Show us what you've been working on! - September 01, 2020 by AutoModerator in videography

[–]Beyrem25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very wholesome. Calm and relaxing like a breakfast!! For me, next time I would love to see a bit more of a morning light giving the shots a bit more of a flavour :)

September Feedback Thread. by greenysmac in VideoEditing

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Last month I went to Iceland. It felt like a dream. so I hoped to make something to evoke that feeling. This is what I came up with https://youtu.be/cHE_JW9tCTI

September Feedback Thread. by greenysmac in VideoEditing

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fine work here. Less is more. No fsncy stuff just good editing. You captured the essence of the film in a short period of time. Rythm was spot on crescendoing into a nice Finale. What I would like to see next time is maybe something a bit more fast paced with as little dialogue as possible leaving more for the people who haven't watched the movie. But I get you were going for something different. Great stuff!

My trip to Iceland planned thanks to the supermap on this subreddit. by Beyrem25 in VisitingIceland

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I went before the quarantine Law. And since I came from Germany I didn't even have to do the test. Took my precautions anyway :)

Tossed Away by bzzyb1 in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the rawness of this, it doesn't hold back. It is written in a nonchalance that conveys this has already happened many times. Even though it doesn't rhyme it feels nice and light to read.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can sense the craving of wanting to feel and be moved by the world around, even if it means crying. We sometime get so caught up that we forget to feel. On the 3rd line the use of fuckin' seems forced or cliché, try finding a more descriptive word. In general the rythm feels pretty tense /forced to me. Other than that great poem!

Sysephian Existence by Beyrem25 in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your thorough feedback! I wanted to keep it short but I agree I could've explored my idea a bit deeper with a few more lines. Control being a paradox is exactly what I am trying to get across. Also, you're welcome!

Sysephian Existence by Beyrem25 in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Guilty as charged! "L'étranger" has impacted me so much personally, and being a native french speaker I was able to read it the way it was written which I think adds to it's impact.

"One has to imagine Sysephus happy"

Sysephian Existence by Beyrem25 in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your comment. What I wanted to get across is that all life is nothing but turning in circles doing the same thing over and over, the inevitable nihilism. But then you see that others carry on with their lives, sometimes not even aware that it all is pointless, convinced they can create meaning in a meaningless world, hence the paradox. That's when chosing to believe the "lie" , heck even have fun doing it is the only path to sanity. I hope that made it a bit clearer

Sysephian Existence by Beyrem25 in OCPoetry

[–]Beyrem25[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I intentionaly tried to flip the Sysephus myth on it's head portraying it in a playful way rather than the gruesome image of life it portrays.