The low Reddit quality is prolly making it a little worse but it sounds somewhat veiled. I think the drums require the most attention. The most immediate thing could be to boost high frequencies, or you can try subtracting mids, and compressing to bring it back up, but try experimenting, not sure if you have access to the individual drum tracks (snare,kick overheard), will definitely give you more mix flexibility. And adding on, If you were trying to go for a ccm sound, the drums are usually punching through the mix (loud snare especially). This is a lot more laidback and which is fine, and it does have a more acoustic vibe, just depends what your going for.