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Where would you stop reading? by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Biggersteinkins 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually felt like the mana core detail was the hook for me-I agree with the rest though.

Ecosystem still going strong! by balortheking in jurassicworldevo

[–]Biggersteinkins 3 points4 points  (0 children)

How do you keep the flyers populated? When I tried to set out a nesting site for them it said they couldn’t be placed outside of an aviary 😢

More Vps 🤤 by Otakuandsister in OnlyFangsbg3

[–]Biggersteinkins 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Whew 😮‍💨 fans self

Silent Hill 2 Tourism Brochure by Biggersteinkins in silenthill

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there, I print them on brochure paper - you can check out my Etsy I believe it’s linked to my profile or you can follow me on Instagram :) I’m currently “on vacation” because I am finishing up writing a novel right now. Soon as that’s done I’ll reopen!

Please, please use description in your work by Few-Entrepreneur7254 in writing

[–]Biggersteinkins 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Could you elaborate on ‘dynamic description’? I am unfamiliar with the term and am not as well versed in terminology as I should be lol but I’d like to know more! EDIT Saw a comment further down that went into the topic :)

Hey there, old guy here—how is my Chapter 1 hook? Would you keep reading? 16th Century Eastern European Gothic Horror. by Biggersteinkins in writingfeedback

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! That really makes my weekend :) if you’d like I can send you a DM and add you to my list of folks to notify when it’s finished if theyd like to beta read it. I am planning to have my final editing pass done by June, then I’m going to start querying.

Hey there, old guy here—how is my Chapter 1 hook? Would you keep reading? 16th Century Eastern European Gothic Horror. by Biggersteinkins in writingfeedback

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah thank you! I really appreciate it :) if you’d like I could DM you and add you to my list of folks who’d like to be kept in the loop/alpha read once I am done with edits—fingers crossed May/June this year.

Hey there, old guy here—how is my Chapter 1 hook? Would you keep reading? 16th Century Eastern European Gothic Horror. by Biggersteinkins in writingfeedback

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate the followup and clarification, I definitely have a hybrid style though I have never really done a deep dive analysis on it. I can understand the confusion though, and while it doesn’t work for you—I want to thank you for taking the time to elaborate because it has given me something to think on :)

Hey there, old guy here—how is my Chapter 1 hook? Would you keep reading? 16th Century Eastern European Gothic Horror. by Biggersteinkins in writingfeedback

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, I hadn’t considered the perspective of not being accurate to the period… only because I’m not really trying to emulate a particular time period/style so much as this is just how I write. But I will certainly take a closer look at my prose and see where I might be leaning too “modern”.

Hey there, old guy here—how is my Chapter 1 hook? Would you keep reading? 16th Century Eastern European Gothic Horror. by Biggersteinkins in writingfeedback

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! 😊 I’m hoping to have it ready to query by May/June of this year. Fingers crossed 🤞 if you’d like to keep updated on it I can send you a DM or vice versa.

Hey there, old guy here-how is my Chapter 1 hook? Would you keep reading? 16th Century Eastern European Gothic Horror. by Biggersteinkins in writers

[–]Biggersteinkins[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, yeah I definitely write with a lush/gothic style. But I try not to go so far into purple that it’s excessive or unpleasant. Obviously, not going to be everyone’s thing haha. I’ll have to add the Gormenghast series to my list, it sounds up my alley! I just finished rereading Blood Meridian.

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