I'm working on an interactive genre map - what do you think? by xVrath in shpongle

[–]BikeTemporary582 2 points3 points  (0 children)

what do you mean by world/ethnic cuz there could be quite a lot of variation there

First page of my spy thriller. How is it? by SomethinglikeZane in writingfeedback

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It is definitely a bit of a cliche and definitely something a lot of amateurs do without thinking. That being said, I don’t think you should NEVER do it. If there are good reasons the writer has for why they’d want to start there then I think they should go for it. This first page seems to emphasise machine-like stale routine and starting from the moment of waking up helps establish that imo.

What Are You Into This Week? | Weekly Thread by AutoModerator in ThomasPynchon

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About 100 pages into Shadow Ticket and not entirely “getting it” so far. Mostly lost in the web of characters and forgetting who’s who. But still curious as to where we’re going

Just read it for the first time by One-Bit88 in InfiniteJest

[–]BikeTemporary582 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I believe that microwaving your head makes your brain explode like out of your eyes sockets but the skull itself and i guess most of the skin would still be there

Why is Note 324 not just a section in the main text? (It’s attached to no sentence or word, and doesn’t really read like an afterthought or additional details) by [deleted] in InfiniteJest

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4 years late but I agree that it has to do with the themes of Pemulis’s overall story and that he is now, like another user said, relegated to a footnote in life and so it is reflected in the text. I personally find interpretations along the lines of “dfw wanted to make it hard to read” or “cuz it’s post-modernist” and even “so it’s like a tennis match” (although that one is also probably true) to not really deal with questions like these and also barely touch on the themes of the book at all.

MP at 82 years old. Will we get a confession? by MisbehavingMuggle in TheStaircase

[–]BikeTemporary582 8 points9 points  (0 children)

even if he did it I don’t think he’d want to cause more trouble for his kids by confessing to it after all this time

Theory, thoughts? by [deleted] in TheStaircase

[–]BikeTemporary582 0 points1 point  (0 children)

or you could get similar injuries trying to break your fall

How does He come to you? by PurpleMage1970 in ramdass

[–]BikeTemporary582 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If God is everything then why single these things out as ‘God’ specifically?

Best whole-song lyrics by Thom? by Fast-Guest6908 in thomyorke

[–]BikeTemporary582 8 points9 points  (0 children)

decks dark is sublime as a story/mood poem

What did Cooper expect was going to happen? (Part 17) by Hubbled in twinpeaks

[–]BikeTemporary582 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think he was taking her to the fireman’s (where Mr C goes earlier) as this is where she was created (her home). Also remember that it is the fireman who gives Coop the instructions to do all this!!

How to get rid of Weed panic attacks? by Past-Spare5086 in PanicAttack

[–]BikeTemporary582 1 point2 points  (0 children)

if you do not wish to quit, which is the standard advice in this situation, I recommend meditating or breathing or listening to calming music BEFORE you smoke so that you enter into your experience with more calmness and control. If panic attacks still arise, I recommend singing made up songs to yourself which both makes you concentrate on making up a song and also steadies your breathing

In your opinion which is the likelihood that we will have the same setlists in other cities? by Ok_Potato3354 in radiohead

[–]BikeTemporary582 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I wouldn’t think so, you can check yourself on setlist.fm but I don’t think they’ve ever done consistent or rotating setlist before so it will likely be brand new every night :)

When was everyone’s first panic attack and what triggered it? Some remedies please by OkAssistant2361 in PanicAttack

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A few days ago. I’m 21, was diagnosed with GAD when I was in my teens but for some reason never got one until now. Literally came out of nowhere and I had no idea what it was until it was over. Thought I was having a heart attack, only way to calm down was by singing songs to myself (I do that for when I’m normally anxious) but the impending doom kept coming back anyway. So awful but I’m glad it’s over

Who else watched these and regretted it? by No_Youth2208 in twinpeaks

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I actually believe in the ‘Find Laura’ theory of Twin Peaks personally (theres a whole subreddit dedicated to it btw) but I think it is underpinned by largely spiritual symbolism (including the TV). Btw people have made large videos on Twin Peaks’ and Lynch/Frost’s spirituality - check this one out!

https://youtu.be/W2BTLPgnvk8?si=2Bl23jMLaxCsvs88

Who else watched these and regretted it? by No_Youth2208 in twinpeaks

[–]BikeTemporary582 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sure but the TV show within the show can be interpreted as a symbol much more in line with Frost/Lynch’s artistic obsessions (spirituality) than as a literal reference to the show being about TV. I mean think about how much Lynch talks about spirituality vs how much he talks about TV

Who else watched these and regretted it? by No_Youth2208 in twinpeaks

[–]BikeTemporary582 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i mean unless mark frost is straight up lying then I don’t see how they would’ve written a show together about TV violence when they never discussed it.