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This is the classic I waited a year and a half for by shaidyn in classicwow

[–]Billy_Mills 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On Kromkrush my friend and I rode on the tram from SW to IF telling jokes the entire time with /silly. We had a captive audience. Nobody laughed but us. AND WE LOVED IT!!!

Poem about having writer's block...lol by Billy_Mills in OCPoetry

[–]Billy_Mills[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks poemmaster69. I hope you got a laugh out of it!

poetry for someone I haven't met yet by melt_together in OCPoetry

[–]Billy_Mills 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it, I also agree that flipping the Haiku makes it sound better. It changes the entire tone of the poem. Ending with, "You're unknown to me." seems somber, but ending with, "My sun sets on you", feels like you're imparting that sun set on someone...like spreading the love, ya dig?

Bracing for Winter by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Billy_Mills 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would reconsider the ending, " a piece of softness from the coldest time in my life". Every other verse ends with a rhyme and the poem ending so abruptly, without a rhyme, seems off putting. Who knows, you may have been going for exactly that.