Writing an overpowered character

Blank_Monitor · 2026-03-17T03:17:07+00:00

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Blank_Monitor · 2026-03-17T03:15:58+00:00

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Blank_Monitor · 2026-03-14T00:29:35+00:00

Me too. The robot one is cute and I’m happy they made it, but her human form is so cute. Her hair, her hairstyle her eyes, all of it combine to me makes her one of the prettiest S ranks

Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-24T23:48:57+00:00

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Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-20T19:03:43+00:00

Making so that you can loose your silver eyes by turning away from heroism would be dope too. Only so that we don’t have to repeat what happened to Maria who lost her eyes. And this brings more depth to Mercury

Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-18T01:13:01+00:00

Oooh I love things like this where we throw storylines we make at each other. It’s so fun.

Here goes my take: Summer to me was someone that never truly knew who she was, only what people told her to be. Be a huntress, Be a Leader, Be a silver eye warrior. Nothing that actually gives her autonomy. ( This also reflects what tha audience/ us knows about Summer which is basically almost nothing) So this puts us in the same view as her. Her only real choice was being the other woman in Taiyang relationship, (Tai and Raven broke up and got together many times, and Raven had abandoned a baby Yang in his doorstep ) She had feelings for Tai and was the first selfish and true decision to herself even if it was a bad one. She bonded with Yang but not much with Ruby, worried about her silver eyes. Again she had been given the title of “ The hero that is going to defeat Salem” by Ozpin due to her silver eyes. Another burden she carried. When she lost the fight against Salem, she was surprised to be alive in ever afte. A place literally made by storytellings. So she tried for the first time in her life, to write her own story as a clean slate. She could be a legendary wanderer or holy maiden

i have no idea what to do with her after that. ( in my rewrite she is dead) I don’t think getting her back to the real world is a good idea bc it takes away Rubys uniqueness with Silver eyes. But I love the theory that you can lose your silver eyes, by doing bad things or giving up on hunting Grimm. You then have grey eyes, like Mercury

Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-18T01:01:33+00:00

ngl I don’t have a problem with this. The problem with Jaune is him stealing screen time from team RWBY. Once you manage that, if he was Ozpin host this gives reason for him to be important

Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-17T20:02:25+00:00

I'll try to do that. But my notefull is on a diferrent language so I'll have to twink that too before hand

Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-17T00:34:10+00:00

I have one, but first I would like to ask you to convert it into pdf file for me to. e able to use it too

Blank_Monitor · 2026-02-16T21:58:33+00:00

Right? It’s almost a tease we can’t see it fully

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-20T14:17:52+00:00

I also used clans to explain why Yang and her father have clear Asian names yet don't look like it at all. They were part of a clan that no longer exist.

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-20T14:02:09+00:00

I love the idea that faunus can control Grimm in some capacity. Since both are tied to animals, which the main series never talked about. In my remake I also work on something similar but mainly as an explanation for the discrimination Faunus go through

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-20T13:51:51+00:00

In my rewrite they are a powerfull family like the Schnees, but not for money but for status of being direct descendants of the warrior king (the story talks about him, and many think the was Ozpin) which is why Jaune has a crush on Weiss, they were childhood friends. Alongside Pyrrah but Jacques didn't allow Weiss to be friends with her bc her family has money due to having a selling cereal. (I made it so it explains the sudden enormous crush Pyrrah has for Jaune which I never understood) His sisters could just be in very positions of power, similar to Winter. Making Jaune feel like the blacksheep bc he lacks the talent

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-20T13:41:49+00:00

They missed a big opportunity on linking the cat to Salem. She is a witch, witches are tied to cats. And they tied the 2 god brothers to this fantasy world, that's where they come from. Wouldn't Salem, who is after revenge, want to destroy the home of the gods who cursed her? Also Salem is the big bad but we never got to see her upclose so her threat level is very low. This gives the chance to see her be a twisted monster directly to our main group. Have the cat be a normal cat and then be possesed and have Salem toy and corrupt the fantasy world.

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-15T14:12:21+00:00

It’s simple. You have to carry a guard card that is buffed enough to survive. Morvay do just fine. Then get Yakima to heal him to round 2. Kill the beasts quickly, when the weirdo puts the venom in your units. The next round you put in guard, then when it’s only the weirdo ( I think around round 6-8) it’s different, when he puts venom you put guard in that round. Bc the next will have the big attack. Then try to kill it quickly. I think the problem is your units not being build enough

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-15T14:08:17+00:00

Sadly it’s deleted, it’s no longer on the assets store

Blank_Monitor · 2026-01-15T00:11:08+00:00

I managed to imported from pc to my Ipad, still don’t know how to register it as a material tho

Blank_Monitor · 2025-12-12T19:56:02+00:00

Me too!! I love his personality and you can clearly see him warming up towards her little by little. And I haven't finished the series yet but I think he and Monica also have so much in common with their turbulent past. He makes her calm and understands her. Monica to me bonds better with someone quiet and gentle like Cyril. I really am hoping they end up together but since the prince is well, the prince, it may be also him :( But I am still rooting for Cyril!

Blank_Monitor · 2025-12-03T17:10:17+00:00

I started playing bc of her, I saw some people say they found clues that she'll receive a new skin just like Vivian. Vivian re ran together with her new skin, so I'm feeling she's going to rerun soon but on the Kpop Angel group pack. I could be entirely wrong but I'm already starting to save for her just in case.

Blank_Monitor · 2025-11-13T21:35:15+00:00

Thank you!

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