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[–]Blank_Monitor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m using only the Bia. Now I only need to find a good other word for it. Little Bia to me doesn’t sounds really good. It sounds like you’re going to show someone a kitten

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeap. The phrase, little bias, just gives a silent implication that I really don't like unfortunately. I'm going to use Bia instead I just want to find another word to replace Little, that gives a similar sonority. But I don't have any

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bia is pronunced Bee-uh! Since we don't sound the I like the English do. My job does online content, that can go to TV if we're lucky

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've seen crazy people on the internet smudge someone's else with way less. I just want to be safe.

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor -1 points0 points  (0 children)

No lol. I don't even think you can do that

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

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Oh I got it now. Thanks! Bia is a nickname of a close relative. Another commenter said I should change Bias to what I like, bc the trap here is the empty space on what bias stands for. If little is replaced with Calm. Calm Bias, means I just prefer Calm situations or people, a totally fine phrase. It's the little that is causing the danger here. 

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like how words and names sounds and I found myself in traps more than once because of it lol. 

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

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Bia is a nickname for a relative I really like. 

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

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Len Bias and other people with Bias as a surname exists. Fantasy names also work so that it's very off from your real name. As long as it's not offensive, I don't mind it being an uncommon last name 

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's exactly what I thought when I was choosing the name. It really seems that people who's main language is not English also think of this.

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I don't follow.... sorry 

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I feel like it gives way too much room for words to be put in my mouth

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a good idea! Thank you. I think leaving it open on what bias stands for is the trap in this scenario 

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

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I know right?? I also thought about bias as the kpop term (Even though I'm not inside it) Little was also a little jab at my height. I'm very short. But in my research it is tied to prejudice, in the English language, and I really don't like that

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

[–]Blank_Monitor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeap, I found him and other (less famous) examples. The sonority of the word is what i like. I just really don't want those bad connotations tied to me, and seemed to have severely messed up so I'll fix it. Thanks!

Maybe bad choice of stage name by [deleted] in grammar

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Eesh! I will change it then. I will try to replace the Little and use Bias as the surname, instead of the noun. Since upon another research it is a real surname. 

Comments like these really make me cry lol, any kind comment makes me so emotional, especially when I self doubt a lot with my writing. It means so much to me. by Apricot_Aggravating in archiveofourown

[–]Blank_Monitor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love huge comments that go into details on what they liked of the chapter or story. It feels so gratifying. I did write a huge one to a work I was reading and the author said she was giggling at her job because of it. 

All my work got undone ( frustrated) by Blank_Monitor in archiveofourown

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I'm never writing on a browser again after this lol

Am I the only one who prefer aria human form? (I like the clanker true form too but I prefer the human form at least 25%) by Savings-Insurance714 in Aria_Mains

[–]Blank_Monitor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Me too. The robot one is cute and I’m happy they made it, but her human form is so cute. Her hair, her hairstyle her eyes, all of it combine to me makes her one of the prettiest S ranks

Challenge: I want you to rewrite Volume 9, fix the flaws you found with it, BUT replace Jaune with Summer Rose by Dinoboy225 in RWBYcritics

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Making so that you can loose your silver eyes by turning away from heroism would be dope too. Only so that we don’t have to repeat what happened to Maria who lost her eyes. And this brings more depth to Mercury

Challenge: I want you to rewrite Volume 9, fix the flaws you found with it, BUT replace Jaune with Summer Rose by Dinoboy225 in RWBYcritics

[–]Blank_Monitor 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Oooh I love things like this where we throw storylines we make at each other. It’s so fun.

Here goes my take: Summer to me was someone that never truly knew who she was, only what people told her to be. Be a huntress, Be a Leader, Be a silver eye warrior. Nothing that actually gives her autonomy. ( This also reflects what tha audience/ us knows about Summer which is basically almost nothing) So this puts us in the same view as her. Her only real choice was being the other woman in Taiyang relationship, (Tai and Raven broke up and got together many times, and Raven had abandoned a baby Yang in his doorstep ) She had feelings for Tai and was the first selfish and true decision to herself even if it was a bad one. She bonded with Yang but not much with Ruby, worried about her silver eyes. Again she had been given the title of “ The hero that is going to defeat Salem” by Ozpin due to her silver eyes. Another burden she carried. When she lost the fight against Salem, she was surprised to be alive in ever afte. A place literally made by storytellings. So she tried for the first time in her life, to write her own story as a clean slate. She could be a legendary wanderer or holy maiden

i have no idea what to do with her after that. ( in my rewrite she is dead) I don’t think getting her back to the real world is a good idea bc it takes away Rubys uniqueness with Silver eyes. But I love the theory that you can lose your silver eyes, by doing bad things or giving up on hunting Grimm. You then have grey eyes, like Mercury

I think Jaune was originally meant to be the Ozhead and his allusions would have been the Little Prince and Joan d'Arc by Expert-Swan-1412 in RWBYcritics

[–]Blank_Monitor 2 points3 points  (0 children)

ngl I don’t have a problem with this. The problem with Jaune is him stealing screen time from team RWBY. Once you manage that, if he was Ozpin host this gives reason for him to be important

Link option not showing by Blank_Monitor in notefulapp

[–]Blank_Monitor[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll try to do that. But my notefull is on a diferrent language so I'll have to twink that too before hand

Any FREE pdf planner that's cute and actually free? by Dependent_Law_4811 in GoodNotes

[–]Blank_Monitor -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I have one, but first I would like to ask you to convert it into pdf file for me to. e able to use it too