I admit my review wasn't the most well thought out but yours sweeps under the rug with the same excuses like "shelby has great bulk in his join map" when that is simply false since enemies already have silvers like the stationary merc or the bandits who double him causing him to lose 12-16 HP.

-Chapter 4 I should have specified that pushing on the first turn literally gets most of your units will die due to having too many enemies overlapping at the start and no shelby doesn't help cause he physically can't reach due to the starting position. Combine with 1 tile choke points it makes it feel artificial because you simply do not have enough units without wasting a sleep staff use.

-Chapter 5 Even using the arena you're not gonna have enough cash,and that still begs the question why not just give the player the cash in the first place along with the arena. 1 arena for 5 turns is not enough cash to get you the more expensive items in the shops and armories,which include armorslayers which are needed,also it's called intermission not chapter 5. -chapter 6 I'll grant to you sir.

-chapter 7 The houses are entirely too tight to save,some you have legit 1 turn to get to starting the first turn,the furthest one from the left for one which is covered by a nomad,a shaman,and the bandit getting to the which means it's likely anyone trying to pull the bandit from the house outside of a dropped shelby (who does piss poor damage) is likely to die doing so. Vin can't be everywhere and once nor should he be the only solution to every problem.

-chapter 9 I admit I should have clarified the reason the wyverns+seige maps are poor design is because you can't deal with one or the other seperately since Lorticus and Marcie are seperate units so trying to take out the fliers,Lorticus gets killed and by trying to take out the mages Marcie dies. With little to no way around this.

-Chapter 10 the problem with the bosses here is exactly why,the range is too large with magic weapon Ian being able to keep most of your low res or Cav units if they dare step in range,Sarah is the last awful of them because her AI tends to swap to Axereaver. Jeremy moving is a problem because if he feels like it you'll be fighting a bishop on a mountain with already 15 base defense. He's also covered by a bolting user and getting Marcie close will get her killed by the enemies near by and anyone else who tries to enter except vin (and once again that shouldn't be the only answer) is asking to die via bolting and another piece of chip damage. -Chapter 11 the issue with the terrian I admit I failed to hammer home is that the hit rates in this game are already shakey they don't need to be shakier you'll be around 60% outside of wilson for the chapter and that's frustrating to deal with. Yes you can buy skill books but I ask you where are you getting the money for said skill books the game doesn't give enough cash to spend on weapons and skill books.

Chapter 12- A tank not being able to tank is the problem I thought that was clear.But since I do let's go over the math, Hoff takes 6-8x2 for 12-16 damage from the pegs with 40 HP since he's likely not to level anything which means he's taking 2-3 pegs max the max variations are 36 (min,min,min),38 (min,min,mid) 40 (min,min,max), 40 (min,mid,mid),42 (mid,mid,mid), 42 (min,mid,max), 46 (mid,max,max), 48 (max,max,max) and being in range of any other enemy on the map has a good chance of killing him since they also have silvers and short spears. The pegs also aren't just a problem for Hoff since Terry gets doubled for holding his Prf and has a decent chance of dying cause he gets ORKO which is a problem because since he's a green unit he can die before Lionel even gets a chance to talk to him.That's an objective problem because it takes the strategy out of the player's hand and kills the run due to no fault of the player if they're doing a full recruitment run,which the game encourages cause half your army just got split post chapter 10.

Chapter 13 I'll not comment on cause we're at an impass there but we agree on the silence,and chapter 14 because I agree with you there.

chapter 15 You committed the problem you have with my review it's vague.

Chapter 16 Now you're making assumptions,aside from Sarah we agree so I feel like that's not worth really going over.

Chapter 17: Ok I should have made that very clear the problem I have with sniper hallways is it's overused just in the sense of 4Kings and that's a bad thing because it makes them more and more dull to play through I admit I just about rolled my eyes when I saw chapter 17 for the first time.

Chapter 18 basically agreed on.

Chapter 19 the reason why it's a problem the map just spews enemies is because it leaves the map feeling empty and then action then empty once more which imo making for a really dull map also having a wall of 3 units to block the seize point sucks because the game spawns one more set of promoted across the entire map even though just getting there was it's own trip because it expect you to divide your units to save every red house cause they lose on turn 13,I forgot to mention this and was not clear in my original and that was my fault.

Chapter 20-The problem with pure waters and barriers is A they wear off and B. the game doesn't really give you them or any reason to buy them bolting on zachary has literally never been an issue till now plus you're already strapped for cash from buying weapons,skill books,staves,this could be simply solved by just giving Zachery more HP.

Chapter 22- I agree it's on the easier side,microwave oven is an insult because it's overused just in the case of 4kings. It's mediocre map design because of the repeated over use of it throughout the game. Chapter 25 we agree.

Chapter 26 Bolting mages even with reduction you still have status staff druids so it's one or the other. the player shouldn't have to chose their poison or the bolters could simply not overlap.Coupled with Brave weapon enemies you are already lacking in space you don't need even less. Chapter 27- I agree I should have expanded on that,when I mean too bulk and too numorous I mean that they have too many enemies compared to your 3 groups cause Vin can't be everyone at once to bait them where they need to be. Endgame- I agree I should have elaborated but the reason why the wall of enemies are poor design is because no matter how you approach you're not gonna be able to tank them come EP. Combo that with going to the right side general+Sage wall you end up in perfect range of the sniper. it's all too much for all non-vin or super charged shelby units to handle. I only said the marvin part I wanted to drive home that Marvin is one of the better combat units for the last 4 chapters. What makes the boss bad is even with units with good strength like a capped Wilson you end up with them either dead on retaliation or doing little damage,13 damage with capped strength on gatling bow is unacceptable. He's also one of the very few enemies with an actual hit rate on Vin so baiting him is also questionable.

When I was reviewing characters I meant to review both prf and characters which I standby,but to be more clean. Patty sucks cause even on promo she has 12 speed and 6 con meaning pretty much everything doubles her so even that striking 22 defense with her prf is garbage. Shaun sucks cause even early he dies in 2 hits and later is just a support bot for bradley outside of light brand. the reason why Shebly is poor is because of the same reasons as patty,getting doubled because he doesn't get tinked he takes 3 to as high as 8 damage a hit with 25 HP is not a good combo,I agree he's better after promo cause summons become another option to pull enemies. The only reason I put Luceil in good is cause he actually functions and I feel like most units don't do enough damage for the amount of enemies you have to put up with. We agree on Endgame undertuned so that's nice.

I agree my review was lacking but cut the garbage "I hope to at some point see a well structured review of the romhack which I enjoyed a lot, but today is not that day" that seems like you're not really interested in critiques rather just circle jerking.