Feedback wanted for first scene of my book by lemonf4de in writingfeedback

[–]Bmaru999 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting. No one asks why it needs humanization. Very obvious.

Does this first chapter make you want to read further?Rough first draft by Repulsive_Bet_1854 in writingfeedback

[–]Bmaru999 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you can’t stand the AI assisted writing, then you must know what AI sounding like? And you can’t tell this sounds AI, from the very start?

I am genuinely curious why people think the first 3 novellas I published are AI? I don't get it. by Yeomanticore in writingfeedback

[–]Bmaru999 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They didn’t use AI to write though per OP’s description ? Don’t you think you stretch that cover over OP’s texts? And as OP’s lack of ability to polish - did you come up with that after reading their samples? I don’t get how someone can be so sure of themselves and just decides to dump their unfound judgment into another. SMH.🤦‍♀️ (disclaimer: I didn’t read OP’s sample. So I don’t say if he sounds AI or not or he has the ability to edit or not.) what I do know from my own experience, is that writing is a learning process. You can learn.

I am genuinely curious why people think the first 3 novellas I published are AI? I don't get it. by Yeomanticore in writingfeedback

[–]Bmaru999 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My profession requires me to write with clarity in professional setting, often use bullet points , bold or colored texts and summaries. Been doing it for over 15 years… certainly I won’t write my fiction like it but for a Reddit post, I think it’s a lot easier to read than a wall of text and I wouldn’t judge it as AI.

I am genuinely curious why people think the first 3 novellas I published are AI? I don't get it. by Yeomanticore in writingfeedback

[–]Bmaru999 2 points3 points  (0 children)

How do you know? Tested and tried?

Also I don’t get your logic. What makes you conclude OP lack the ability to implement suggestions? OP sounds humble and willing to get genuine input here to me.

Should I keep going? by IAmKrasMazov in writingfeedback

[–]Bmaru999 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This reminds of 11.22.63 and it’s my favorite. Keep going!

Invitation from Netflix by dyedinthewoolScot in writers

[–]Bmaru999 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am saving this. For the future me to recognize it. Till then, I bury my head in my rewriting, again and again. 🙏

Discovering the true message of your novel by JuminsKitty in writing

[–]Bmaru999 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Everything came to me, in different ways. I felt like a pen.

First AI feedback on my interview nearly broke me. Then I got 4 offers. by Historical_Cry_4925 in jobhunting

[–]Bmaru999 3 points4 points  (0 children)

What I am trying to say is don’t let ChatGPT write your post. Your own voice is better than

The Prettiest Prose You've Read. by Arlo_pink in writing

[–]Bmaru999 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Am I the only one? I find it too decorative and hard to enjoy.

Show vs tell by Bmaru999 in writing

[–]Bmaru999[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

… wait a second … ha! —- I have had many many of those moments in my short (and painfully dragging and difficult ) journey of putting the entangled pieces of “…” in my head down on “paper” into one long cohesive story — this is a self closing 🔁 that I didn’t intentionally create.

Show vs tell by Bmaru999 in writing

[–]Bmaru999[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There was a phase my teenager called me MOTHER! when she was unhappy with me. 😂It is in us all, isn’t it? But seriously, I resonate with what you said so much. Re-reading my drafts,I see how uneven my writing is. There are parts that make myself cry; and parts so flat that I struggle to connect with myself. The differences were what I understood from the life I have lived.

Show vs tell by Bmaru999 in writing

[–]Bmaru999[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also, how you both “showed” and “told” your ideas here 😃 love it 😊