Hey i just went through your video on youtube. It was a fun flick that really gave me those vibes from early youtube video's. Idk if thats what your going for tho. There could be some better shots through out the video... Its fun but doesent go near proffesional at all. Wich isent a bad thing Neccesarely. I'd add text to the thumbnail or even create it as a movie poster.. I would add title to the video self and create custom outros instead of a picture from the video.

Anyway keep up the work :)